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{{*mp}}... that '''[[Brian Ehlers]]''' was just the second repeat winner of being named the [[Patriot League Men's Basketball Player of the Year]]?
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: '''ALT1''' ... that former basketball player '''[[Brian Ehlers]]''' is now a police officer?
 
: '''ALT1''' ... that former basketball player '''[[Brian Ehlers]]''' is now a police officer?
 
Which one is better: original or ALT1? --[[User:George Ho|George Ho]] ([[User talk:George Ho|talk]]) 15:01, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
 
Which one is better: original or ALT1? --[[User:George Ho|George Ho]] ([[User talk:George Ho|talk]]) 15:01, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
 
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::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Your ALT1 is definitely better, George Ho. Article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, no close paraphrasing seen, and well-written. ALT1 hook ref verified. Good to go.
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Brian Ehlers

Created/expanded by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 20:46, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svg Article is well-referenced and well-informed. Hook is decent, but I wonder if this hook is the most interesting of this article. I would suggest a basketball player becoming a current police officer as an alternative hook. However, this tick is a good-faith on the hook. --George Ho (talk) 03:34, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Symbol redirect vote4.png You know what? I can't wait any longer. While the article has reliable sources and verified information, this nomination needs another hook:

ALT1 ... that former basketball player Brian Ehlers is now a police officer?

Which one is better: original or ALT1? --George Ho (talk) 15:01, 5 November 2012 (UTC)