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{{*mp}}<s>... that '''[[Brian Ehlers]]''' was just the second repeat winner of being named the [[Patriot League Men's Basketball Player of the Year]]?</s> | {{*mp}}<s>... that '''[[Brian Ehlers]]''' was just the second repeat winner of being named the [[Patriot League Men's Basketball Player of the Year]]?</s> | ||
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<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Jrcla2|Jrcla2]] ([[User talk:Jrcla2|talk]]). Self nom at 20:46, 31 October 2012 (UTC)</small> | <small>Created/expanded by [[User:Jrcla2|Jrcla2]] ([[User talk:Jrcla2|talk]]). Self nom at 20:46, 31 October 2012 (UTC)</small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is well-referenced and well-informed. Hook is decent, but I wonder if this hook is the most interesting of this article. I would suggest a basketball player becoming a current police officer as an alternative hook. However, this tick is a good-faith on the hook. --[[User:George Ho|George Ho]] ([[User talk:George Ho|talk]]) 03:34, 2 November 2012 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is well-referenced and well-informed. Hook is decent, but I wonder if this hook is the most interesting of this article. I would suggest a basketball player becoming a current police officer as an alternative hook. However, this tick is a good-faith on the hook. --[[User:George Ho|George Ho]] ([[User talk:George Ho|talk]]) 03:34, 2 November 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Which one is better: original or ALT1? --[[User:George Ho|George Ho]] ([[User talk:George Ho|talk]]) 15:01, 5 November 2012 (UTC) | Which one is better: original or ALT1? --[[User:George Ho|George Ho]] ([[User talk:George Ho|talk]]) 15:01, 5 November 2012 (UTC) | ||
::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Your ALT1 is definitely better, George Ho. Article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, no close paraphrasing seen, and well-written. ALT1 hook ref verified. Good to go. | ::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Your ALT1 is definitely better, George Ho. Article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, no close paraphrasing seen, and well-written. ALT1 hook ref verified. Good to go. | ||
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Revision as of 11:52, 18 November 2012
Brian Ehlers
... that Brian Ehlers was just the second repeat winner of being named the Patriot League Men's Basketball Player of the Year?
- Reviewed: Connie B. Gay
Created/expanded by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 20:46, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
Article is well-referenced and well-informed. Hook is decent, but I wonder if this hook is the most interesting of this article. I would suggest a basketball player becoming a current police officer as an alternative hook. However, this tick is a good-faith on the hook. --George Ho (talk) 03:34, 2 November 2012 (UTC)
You know what? I can't wait any longer. While the article has reliable sources and verified information, this nomination needs another hook:
- ALT1 ... that former basketball player Brian Ehlers is now a police officer?
Which one is better: original or ALT1? --George Ho (talk) 15:01, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
Your ALT1 is definitely better, George Ho. Article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, no close paraphrasing seen, and well-written. ALT1 hook ref verified. Good to go.
- Note: This DYK review is being applied against the QPQ requirement for Template:Did you know nominations/Apollo 11 lunar sample display, Apollo 17 lunar sample display. Yoninah (talk) 23:43, 17 November 2012 (UTC)