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:{{u|Muboshgu}}, hello there. When you have a bit can you look at the citation for the second blurb. I am looking forward to completing my first review :) [[User:Ktin|Ktin]] ([[User talk:Ktin|talk]]) 04:04, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:{{u|Muboshgu}}, hello there. When you have a bit can you look at the citation for the second blurb. I am looking forward to completing my first review :) [[User:Ktin|Ktin]] ([[User talk:Ktin|talk]]) 04:04, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
 
::{{u|Ktin}}, my Wiki attention was on the election this past week. The WaPo obituary includes the sentence {{tq|In 1951, he returned to San Francisco to do the firsat coast-to-coast television broadcast on ABC, on the signing of the U.S.-Japanese peace treaty.}} The [https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/lifestyle/tv/1989/06/25/bryson-rash-he-was-on-tv-before-there-was-tv/3e563c3c-852a-4f61-91ee-508ac464c95c/ other WaPo source] says {{tq|He did the coast-to-coast radio broadcast in San Francisco for the 1945 United Nations Conference and went back in 1951 to do the nation's first coast-to-coast telecast, for ABC, the Japanese Peace Conference.}} – [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 17:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
 
::{{u|Ktin}}, my Wiki attention was on the election this past week. The WaPo obituary includes the sentence {{tq|In 1951, he returned to San Francisco to do the firsat coast-to-coast television broadcast on ABC, on the signing of the U.S.-Japanese peace treaty.}} The [https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/lifestyle/tv/1989/06/25/bryson-rash-he-was-on-tv-before-there-was-tv/3e563c3c-852a-4f61-91ee-508ac464c95c/ other WaPo source] says {{tq|He did the coast-to-coast radio broadcast in San Francisco for the 1945 United Nations Conference and went back in 1951 to do the nation's first coast-to-coast telecast, for ABC, the Japanese Peace Conference.}} – [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 17:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
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::: {{u|Muboshgu}}, Thanks. I did not mean to rush you. 1. Agree on the first coast-to-coast television broadcast. Please can I request you to edit the hook to say "coast to coast" rather than entire United States. The only reason I say this is that we do not know if this was truly all US. Might not have included Alaska, Hawaii etc. But, also, we do not know if it was also broadcast to the other regions within the country. A simple fix would be to use the phrase "coast-to-coast". Hook is definitely interesting.
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2. Regarding the first coast-to-coast radio broadcast, the article only says that he did the coast-to-coast radio broadcast. Does not say that this was the first coast-to-coast radio broadcast.
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Please let me know if I am missing something pertinent. My thinking is we change the hook to "first coast-to-coast television broadcast".
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Cheers.
 
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Revision as of 00:35, 9 November 2020

Bryson Rash

  • ... that White House correspondant Bryson Rash started in radio by voicing Buster Brown at the age of 12? "Buster Brown Goes to the White House". Stlmediahistory.org. July 16, 1950. Retrieved October 23, 2020.

Created by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 20:17, 25 October 2020 (UTC).

  • Comment. Hello there. I will be working on this review. This will be my first DYK review. If there is something that is missed procedurally, please let me know. Prelim review completed and notes below.
  • Checklist.
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  • Template:U, nothing for you to do. I'll do the QPQ today and doublecheck on the factuality of my proposed hook too. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:18, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Ok, QPQ is done... – Muboshgu (talk) 18:46, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, hello there. When you have a bit can you look at the citation for the second blurb. I am looking forward to completing my first review :) Ktin (talk) 04:04, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, my Wiki attention was on the election this past week. The WaPo obituary includes the sentence Template:Tq The other WaPo source says Template:Tq – Muboshgu (talk) 17:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, Thanks. I did not mean to rush you. 1. Agree on the first coast-to-coast television broadcast. Please can I request you to edit the hook to say "coast to coast" rather than entire United States. The only reason I say this is that we do not know if this was truly all US. Might not have included Alaska, Hawaii etc. But, also, we do not know if it was also broadcast to the other regions within the country. A simple fix would be to use the phrase "coast-to-coast". Hook is definitely interesting.

2. Regarding the first coast-to-coast radio broadcast, the article only says that he did the coast-to-coast radio broadcast. Does not say that this was the first coast-to-coast radio broadcast.

Please let me know if I am missing something pertinent. My thinking is we change the hook to "first coast-to-coast television broadcast".

Cheers.