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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]])&nbsp;23:13, 19 November 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that [[White House press corps|White House correspondant]] '''[[Bryson Rash]]''' started in radio by voicing [[Buster Brown]] at the age of 12?  <small>{{cite web|url=https://www.stlmediahistory.org/index.php/Radio/RadioArticles/buster-brown-goes-to-the-white-house |title=Buster Brown Goes to the White House|publisher=Stlmediahistory.org |date=July 16, 1950 |accessdate=October 23, 2020}}</small>
 
* ... that [[White House press corps|White House correspondant]] '''[[Bryson Rash]]''' started in radio by voicing [[Buster Brown]] at the age of 12?  <small>{{cite web|url=https://www.stlmediahistory.org/index.php/Radio/RadioArticles/buster-brown-goes-to-the-white-house |title=Buster Brown Goes to the White House|publisher=Stlmediahistory.org |date=July 16, 1950 |accessdate=October 23, 2020}}</small>
 
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Bryson Rash]]''' performed the first radio and television news broadcasts to the entire United States?  <small>{{cite web|first=J.Y.|last=Smith |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/local/1992/11/12/renowned-dc-broadcaster-bryson-b-rash-dies-at-79/fa0a6963-0d7f-4355-ac8e-bc5a57512ded/ |title=Renowned D.C. Broadcaster Bryson B. Rash Dies at 79 |work=The Washington Post |date=November 12, 1992 |accessdate=October 23, 2020}}</small></s>
 
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Bryson Rash]]''' performed the first radio and television news broadcasts to the entire United States?  <small>{{cite web|first=J.Y.|last=Smith |url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/local/1992/11/12/renowned-dc-broadcaster-bryson-b-rash-dies-at-79/fa0a6963-0d7f-4355-ac8e-bc5a57512ded/ |title=Renowned D.C. Broadcaster Bryson B. Rash Dies at 79 |work=The Washington Post |date=November 12, 1992 |accessdate=October 23, 2020}}</small></s>
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<small>Created by [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:17, 25 October 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:17, 25 October 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:* '''Comment'''. Hello there. I will be working on this review. This will be my first DYK review. If there is something that is missed procedurally, please let me know. Prelim review completed and notes below.
 
:* '''Comment'''. Hello there. I will be working on this review. This will be my first DYK review. If there is something that is missed procedurally, please let me know. Prelim review completed and notes below.
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|comments    = {{u|Muboshgu}}, thanks for this nomination. Couple of quick questions. The first hook is cited, verified, and good to go. However, on the second hook, I am not able to verify the hook based on the WaPo obituary. The WaPo article says a) first televised speech from the White House. b) first television transmission from a mobile unit (in the National Mall). c) First coast to coast television transmission for / on ABC. So, the one that comes cloest to the alt hook is the first coast to coast transmission for / on ABC. Were you able to check any other sources to confirm if this coast to coast was in fact nationwide or was it just across a few stations on either coast. Pardon my being pedantic. Secondly, this WaPo article doesn't say anything about first nationwide radio broadcast. Please let me know if I am missing something. The other question I have is regarding the IOU on the QPQ - is there something that I need to do on that front? Cheers.
 
|comments    = {{u|Muboshgu}}, thanks for this nomination. Couple of quick questions. The first hook is cited, verified, and good to go. However, on the second hook, I am not able to verify the hook based on the WaPo obituary. The WaPo article says a) first televised speech from the White House. b) first television transmission from a mobile unit (in the National Mall). c) First coast to coast television transmission for / on ABC. So, the one that comes cloest to the alt hook is the first coast to coast transmission for / on ABC. Were you able to check any other sources to confirm if this coast to coast was in fact nationwide or was it just across a few stations on either coast. Pardon my being pedantic. Secondly, this WaPo article doesn't say anything about first nationwide radio broadcast. Please let me know if I am missing something. The other question I have is regarding the IOU on the QPQ - is there something that I need to do on that front? Cheers.
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*{{u|Ktin}}, nothing for you to do. I'll do the QPQ today and doublecheck on the factuality of my proposed hook too. &ndash;&nbsp;[[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 18:18, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
 
*{{u|Ktin}}, nothing for you to do. I'll do the QPQ today and doublecheck on the factuality of my proposed hook too. &ndash;&nbsp;[[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 18:18, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
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::::{{u|Ktin}}, I misread that about the "first coast to coast radio broadcast. Fine to change the hooks to make sure they're accurate. &ndash;&nbsp;[[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 05:10, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 
::::{{u|Ktin}}, I misread that about the "first coast to coast radio broadcast. Fine to change the hooks to make sure they're accurate. &ndash;&nbsp;[[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]]&nbsp;([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 05:10, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thanks {{ping|Muboshgu}} Approving ALT0 blurb (above) and ALT3 blurb (below). The posting Admin can pick either, unless you have a preference of one over the other.
 
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Latest revision as of 23:13, 19 November 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:13, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Bryson Rash

  • ... that White House correspondant Bryson Rash started in radio by voicing Buster Brown at the age of 12? "Buster Brown Goes to the White House". Stlmediahistory.org. July 16, 1950. Retrieved October 23, 2020.

Created by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 20:17, 25 October 2020 (UTC).

  • Comment. Hello there. I will be working on this review. This will be my first DYK review. If there is something that is missed procedurally, please let me know. Prelim review completed and notes below.
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  • Template:U, nothing for you to do. I'll do the QPQ today and doublecheck on the factuality of my proposed hook too. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:18, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Ok, QPQ is done... – Muboshgu (talk) 18:46, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, hello there. When you have a bit can you look at the citation for the second blurb. I am looking forward to completing my first review :) Ktin (talk) 04:04, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, my Wiki attention was on the election this past week. The WaPo obituary includes the sentence Template:Tq The other WaPo source says Template:Tq – Muboshgu (talk) 17:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, Thanks. I did not mean to rush you. 1. Agree on the first coast-to-coast television broadcast. Please can I request you to edit the hook to say "coast to coast" rather than entire United States. The only reason I say this is that we do not know if this was truly all US. Might not have included Alaska, Hawaii etc. But, also, we do not know if it was also broadcast to the other regions within the country. A simple fix would be to use the phrase "coast-to-coast". Hook is definitely interesting.
2. Regarding the first coast-to-coast radio broadcast, the article only says that he did the coast-to-coast radio broadcast. Does not say that this was the first coast-to-coast radio broadcast.
Please let me know if I am missing something pertinent. My thinking is we change the hook to "first coast-to-coast television broadcast".
Cheers. Ktin (talk) 00:35, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, I misread that about the "first coast to coast radio broadcast. Fine to change the hooks to make sure they're accurate. – Muboshgu (talk) 05:10, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Thanks Template:Ping Approving ALT0 blurb (above) and ALT3 blurb (below). The posting Admin can pick either, unless you have a preference of one over the other.
ALT3:... that Bryson Rash performed the first coast-to-coast television news broadcast in the United States?