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− | * ... that German-born Turkish international '''[[Büşra Kuru]]''' began playing football at age six encouraged by her footballer brother, who took her to the sports field every day? <small>Source: "Unsere 'Neuen' - Büsra Kuru 21.06.2019 11:27 - Seit 13 Jahren spielt sie nun schon Fußball - ihr Bruder, der ebenfalls Fussball spielte, hat sie dazu bewegt, da sie durch ihn tagtäglich auf dem Sportplatz war." {{LL|de}} [https://www.ffc-niederkirchen.de/news-reader/unsere-neuen-buesra-kuru.html]</small> | + | * <s>... that German-born Turkish international '''[[Büşra Kuru]]''' began playing football at age six encouraged by her footballer brother, who took her to the sports field every day?</s> <small>Source: "Unsere 'Neuen' - Büsra Kuru 21.06.2019 11:27 - Seit 13 Jahren spielt sie nun schon Fußball - ihr Bruder, der ebenfalls Fussball spielte, hat sie dazu bewegt, da sie durch ihn tagtäglich auf dem Sportplatz war." {{LL|de}} [https://www.ffc-niederkirchen.de/news-reader/unsere-neuen-buesra-kuru.html]</small> |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Bangs|Bangs]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Bangs|Bangs]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:CeeGee|CeeGee]] ([[User talk:CeeGee|talk]]). Self-nominated at 11:33, 26 September 2020 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:CeeGee|CeeGee]] ([[User talk:CeeGee|talk]]). Self-nominated at 11:33, 26 September 2020 (UTC).</small> |
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Büşra Kuru
... that German-born Turkish international Büşra Kuru began playing football at age six encouraged by her footballer brother, who took her to the sports field every day?Source: "Unsere 'Neuen' - Büsra Kuru 21.06.2019 11:27 - Seit 13 Jahren spielt sie nun schon Fußball - ihr Bruder, der ebenfalls Fussball spielte, hat sie dazu bewegt, da sie durch ihn tagtäglich auf dem Sportplatz war." (in German) [1]
- Reviewed: Bangs
Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 11:33, 26 September 2020 (UTC).
Interesting career beginning, on good sources, Turkish sources accepted AGF, and I can read the German. I think the hook would be quirkier if you said the same thing by first talking about the initiation, and then that she plays in a German club and the Turkish national team. Try it, - if I do I can't review. "football[er]" needs the same link as in the article, to clarify which kind. - Article: we'll get there, but some things need to change. All hook facts need a ref right after the sentence, that's at present "beginning at age six", and the brother thing. I am no friend of the extra short sections, and one section header is funny ;) - A red link to Poland looks strange ;) (please pipe) - Do we know when she began playing for her hometown team? - Please get rid of "currently" which may be wrong next year. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:23, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your review. I tried to address the ıssues you mentioned, and added following ALT1. Please recheck. Unfortunately, I could not locate the "funny" section header. CeeGee
- ALT1 ... that Büşra Kuru began playing football at age six encouraged by her footballer brother, who took her to the sports field every day, plays in a German club and is a member of the Turkey national team? CeeGee 02:19, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you! The funny header is 2.2.2. - My wording would be
- ... that Büşra Kuru, who began playing football every day at age six, encouraged by her brother, is a member of a German club and of the the Turkey national team?
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:04, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your review. I tried to address the ıssues you mentioned, and added following ALT1. Please recheck. Unfortunately, I could not locate the "funny" section header. CeeGee