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:* '''ALT1''': ... that in the '''[[Cairngorm Plateau Disaster|1971 Cairngorm Plateau disaster]]''' five school students died in a blizzard when they failed to reach the Curran shelter ''(pictured)''?
 
:* '''ALT1''': ... that in the '''[[Cairngorm Plateau Disaster|1971 Cairngorm Plateau disaster]]''' five school students died in a blizzard when they failed to reach the Curran shelter ''(pictured)''?
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:* '''ALT2''': ... that five school students and their leader's assistant died in a blizzard in the 1971 '''[[Cairngorm Plateau Disaster]]''' when they failed to reach the Curran shelter ''(pictured)'' in the [[Scottish Highlands]]?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/List of compositions by Peter Maxwell Davies|List of compositions by Peter Maxwell Davies]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/List of compositions by Peter Maxwell Davies|List of compositions by Peter Maxwell Davies]]
 
:* ''Comment'': I have rather forced into the lead an online reference to the claims in the hook - the best references are offline. If this is not visible then a previewed Google book can be seen (at least by me) at the cited {{cite book|last1=Baker|first1=Patrick|title=The Cairngorms: A Secret History|date=2014|publisher=Birlinn|isbn=9780857908094|url=https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=1Z68BQAAQBAJ&lpg=PT36&ots=dBN8lmW78c&dq=%22feith%20buidhe%20fatal%20accident%22&pg=PT36#v=onepage&q=%22feith%20buidhe%20fatal%20accident%22&f=false|chapter=The Lost Shelter}}
 
:* ''Comment'': I have rather forced into the lead an online reference to the claims in the hook - the best references are offline. If this is not visible then a previewed Google book can be seen (at least by me) at the cited {{cite book|last1=Baker|first1=Patrick|title=The Cairngorms: A Secret History|date=2014|publisher=Birlinn|isbn=9780857908094|url=https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=1Z68BQAAQBAJ&lpg=PT36&ots=dBN8lmW78c&dq=%22feith%20buidhe%20fatal%20accident%22&pg=PT36#v=onepage&q=%22feith%20buidhe%20fatal%20accident%22&f=false|chapter=The Lost Shelter}}
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:* [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] New enough (nominated within 2 days of creation, long enough, well-sourced, neutral, offline sources accepted in good faith, hook is interesting and cited, image is included which is appropriate, QPQ information included. All seems fine. [[User:Drchriswilliams|Drchriswilliams]] ([[User talk:Drchriswilliams|talk]]) 13:22, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
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:* [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] New enough (nominated within 2 days of creation, long enough, well-sourced, neutral, offline sources accepted in good faith, hook is interesting and cited, image is included which is appropriate, QPQ information included. In both versions provided, the link to the article is piped, so I have suggested an alternate without a piped link. Otherwise all seems fine. [[User:Drchriswilliams|Drchriswilliams]] ([[User talk:Drchriswilliams|talk]]) 13:22, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 13:39, 18 April 2016

Cairngorm Plateau Disaster

Curran shelter
Curran shelter
  • ALT1: ... that in the 1971 Cairngorm Plateau disaster five school students died in a blizzard when they failed to reach the Curran shelter (pictured)?
  • ALT2: ... that five school students and their leader's assistant died in a blizzard in the 1971 Cairngorm Plateau Disaster when they failed to reach the Curran shelter (pictured) in the Scottish Highlands?
  • Reviewed: List of compositions by Peter Maxwell Davies
  • Comment: I have rather forced into the lead an online reference to the claims in the hook - the best references are offline. If this is not visible then a previewed Google book can be seen (at least by me) at the cited Baker, Patrick (2014). "The Lost Shelter". The Cairngorms: A Secret History. Birlinn. ISBN 9780857908094.

Created by Thincat (talk). Self-nominated at 08:21, 11 April 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol voting keep.svg New enough (nominated within 2 days of creation, long enough, well-sourced, neutral, offline sources accepted in good faith, hook is interesting and cited, image is included which is appropriate, QPQ information included. In both versions provided, the link to the article is piped, so I have suggested an alternate without a piped link. Otherwise all seems fine. Drchriswilliams (talk) 13:22, 18 April 2016 (UTC)