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{{*mp}}<s>... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' is the world's first [[4K resolution]] [[Digital single-lens reflex camera|DSLR]] camera?</s>
 
{{*mp}}<s>... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' is the world's first [[4K resolution]] [[Digital single-lens reflex camera|DSLR]] camera?</s>
{{*mp}}... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' is the first [[4K resolution]] [[Digital single-lens reflex camera|DSLR]] camera of its kind?
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*'''ALT1''' ... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' is the first [[4K resolution]] [[Digital single-lens reflex camera|DSLR]] camera of its kind?
{{*mp}}... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' can use more than sixty interchangeable [[Canon (company)|Canon]] lenses?
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*'''ALT2'''... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' can use more than sixty interchangeable [[Canon (company)|Canon]] lenses?
 
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:::::Actually, this is the first Canon camera to be able to use 60 different lenses because it is also in the [[Canon Cinema EOS|Cinema EOS]] range. I don't feel the third hook is very promotion compared to the first and second hook. '''<span title="Shoot!" style="font-family: Mono; Cursor: crosshair;">-- Cheers, </span><font color=#0E0E42>[[User:Riley Huntley|Riley]]</font> <font color=#0066FF>[[User talk:Riley Huntley|Huntley]]</font>''' 18:01, 7 October 2012 (UTC)  
 
:::::Actually, this is the first Canon camera to be able to use 60 different lenses because it is also in the [[Canon Cinema EOS|Cinema EOS]] range. I don't feel the third hook is very promotion compared to the first and second hook. '''<span title="Shoot!" style="font-family: Mono; Cursor: crosshair;">-- Cheers, </span><font color=#0E0E42>[[User:Riley Huntley|Riley]]</font> <font color=#0066FF>[[User talk:Riley Huntley|Huntley]]</font>''' 18:01, 7 October 2012 (UTC)  
 
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*... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' shares many features with the [[Canon EOS-1D X]], its predecessor? [[User:Thine Antique Pen|Thine Antique Pen]] ([[User talk:Thine Antique Pen|talk]]) 18:10, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
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*'''ALT3'''... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' shares many features with the [[Canon EOS-1D X]], its predecessor? [[User:Thine Antique Pen|Thine Antique Pen]] ([[User talk:Thine Antique Pen|talk]]) 18:10, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
:{{*mp}}... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' was reviewed before the camera went into production?" - Would work too. Hook would not be highlighting a feature of it, thus does not sound like an advert and also implies the camera is not in production and cannot be bought yet. '''<span title="Shoot!" style="font-family: Mono; Cursor: crosshair;">-- Cheers, </span><font color=#0E0E42>[[User:Riley Huntley|Riley]]</font> <font color=#0066FF>[[User talk:Riley Huntley|Huntley]]</font>''' 05:29, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
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:'''ALT4'''... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' was reviewed before the camera went into production?" - Would work too. Hook would not be highlighting a feature of it, thus does not sound like an advert and also implies the camera is not in production and cannot be bought yet. '''<span title="Shoot!" style="font-family: Mono; Cursor: crosshair;">-- Cheers, </span><font color=#0E0E42>[[User:Riley Huntley|Riley]]</font> <font color=#0066FF>[[User talk:Riley Huntley|Huntley]]</font>''' 05:29, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
*{{*mp}}... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' is the world's first 18.1 megapixel [[Digital single-lens reflex camera|DSLR]] camera capable of shooting [[4K resolution]] video, and costs US$15,000 (body only)?  ''138 characters. --[[User:Lexein|Lexein]] ([[User talk:Lexein|talk]]) 06:22, 8 October 2012 (UTC)''
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*'''ALT5'''... that the '''[[Canon EOS-1D C]]''' is the world's first 18.1 megapixel [[Digital single-lens reflex camera|DSLR]] camera capable of shooting [[4K resolution]] video, and costs US$15,000 (body only)?  ''138 characters. --[[User:Lexein|Lexein]] ([[User talk:Lexein|talk]]) 06:22, 8 October 2012 (UTC)''
 
::*As I noted in [[WT:DYK]], I think including the price feels too much like advertising to me. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 04:35, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 
::*As I noted in [[WT:DYK]], I think including the price feels too much like advertising to me. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 04:35, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
  

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Canon EOS-1D C

  • Comment: Expanded to fivefold. Requesting an uninvolved user to review

Created/expanded by Riley Huntley (talk). Self nom at 10:15, 7 October 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Article is new enough and long enough expansion wise at time of nomination. Hook is properly formatted. Mild concerns that hook COULD read like an advertisement. Having read the article, I'm not sure how you can get a hook for a product like this which will not read that way. No images to check. No plagiarism concerns after check. Article is fully supported by sources. Given topic, I think it is neutral enough as not sure you can write it any other way. It doesn't read as an advert. (I feel like I just reviewed this as really similar to other articles.) Good to go, though I would make sure it isn't run near the other hook on this topic. --LauraHale (talk) 10:32, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
Symbol possible vote.svgI think this hook reads just like an advert, regardless of the article. Secretlondon (talk) 16:58, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
Just added a second possible hook. Any better? -- Cheers, Riley Huntley 17:07, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
I don't think it's any better. It would be an advert on the front page, which we don't want. Secretlondon (talk) 17:19, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
The third is just saying it's an SLR really, as they all have that. I'm uncomfortable as it's promotion for a camera which isn't even out yet and we're just part of the hype. Secretlondon (talk) 17:48, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
Actually, this is the first Canon camera to be able to use 60 different lenses because it is also in the Cinema EOS range. I don't feel the third hook is very promotion compared to the first and second hook. -- Cheers, Riley Huntley 18:01, 7 October 2012 (UTC)

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ALT4... that the Canon EOS-1D C was reviewed before the camera went into production?" - Would work too. Hook would not be highlighting a feature of it, thus does not sound like an advert and also implies the camera is not in production and cannot be bought yet. -- Cheers, Riley Huntley 05:29, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
  • ALT5... that the Canon EOS-1D C is the world's first 18.1 megapixel DSLR camera capable of shooting 4K resolution video, and costs US$15,000 (body only)? 138 characters. --Lexein (talk) 06:22, 8 October 2012 (UTC)
  • As I noted in WT:DYK, I think including the price feels too much like advertising to me. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:35, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote4.png Reviewer needed; promotional aspects of various hooks needs to be addressed in review (i.e., specify which ones are acceptable and which aren't). BlueMoonset (talk) 04:35, 21 October 2012 (UTC)