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::::The article looks better now but the hooks proposed here are still grammatically incorrect. Do you need assistance in fixing them? [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 12:03, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
 
::::The article looks better now but the hooks proposed here are still grammatically incorrect. Do you need assistance in fixing them? [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 12:03, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::{{reply|Narutolovehinata5}} yes please. ___''[[User:CAPTAIN MEDUSA|<em style="font-family:grafolitascript;color:#aa6ef4">CAPTAIN MEDUSA</em>]]<small>[[User talk:CAPTAIN MEDUSA|'''<em style="font-family:grafolitascript;color:#000000">talk</em>''']]</small>'' 12:54, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::{{reply|Narutolovehinata5}} yes please. ___''[[User:CAPTAIN MEDUSA|<em style="font-family:grafolitascript;color:#aa6ef4">CAPTAIN MEDUSA</em>]]<small>[[User talk:CAPTAIN MEDUSA|'''<em style="font-family:grafolitascript;color:#000000">talk</em>''']]</small>'' 12:54, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
:::::'''ALT1a''' ... that Nepalese Prime Minister [[Khadga Prasad Oli]] praised the 2019 film '''''[[Captain (2019 film)|Captain]]''''' for "delivering patriotism"?
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:::::'''ALT1a''' ... that Nepalese Prime Minister [[Khadga Prasad Oli]] praised the 2019 sports drama '''''[[Captain (2019 film)|Captain]]''''' for "delivering patriotism"?
 
:::::Honestly I don't find the hook or the hook fact spectacular, but I'll let another reviewer take a look at this. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 13:04, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::Honestly I don't find the hook or the hook fact spectacular, but I'll let another reviewer take a look at this. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 13:04, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] This is probably worth giving a second look. Requesting a new reviewer. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 12:39, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] This is probably worth giving a second look. Requesting a new reviewer. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 12:39, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] ALT1a is a cute hook. It reminds me of President [[Donald Trump]] commenting on everything on his Twitter account. The hook ref is verified and cited inline. But I have added one tag to the cast list, where the name of the character is not provided. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:02, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] ALT1a is a cute hook. It reminds me of President [[Donald Trump]] commenting on everything on his Twitter account. The hook ref is verified and cited inline. But I have added one tag to the cast list, where the name of the character is not provided. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:02, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
 
::*{{re|Yoninah}} I could not find the cast member's character, on film reviews or film websites.___''[[User:CAPTAIN MEDUSA|<em style="font-family:grafolitascript;color:#aa6ef4">CAPTAIN MEDUSA</em>]]<small>[[User talk:CAPTAIN MEDUSA|'''<em style="font-family:grafolitascript;color:#000000">talk</em>''']]</small>'' 11:41, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
 
::*{{re|Yoninah}} I could not find the cast member's character, on film reviews or film websites.___''[[User:CAPTAIN MEDUSA|<em style="font-family:grafolitascript;color:#aa6ef4">CAPTAIN MEDUSA</em>]]<small>[[User talk:CAPTAIN MEDUSA|'''<em style="font-family:grafolitascript;color:#000000">talk</em>''']]</small>'' 11:41, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
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:::*That's surprising, considering she is one of the lead actresses. I guess you should comment her out until after the DYK runs. I tweaked ALT1a. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 18:18, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
 
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Captain (2019 film)

Created by CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk). Self-nominated at 19:18, 21 March 2019 (UTC).

  • Reviewed:Joravarsinh Jadav
  • Symbol possible vote.svg The hook is not interesting. The cast section is unsourced. There is one unsourced sentence in box office sub-section. RRD (talk) 13:57, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I've added more alts and added refs to cast section and removed unsourced sentence in box office sub-section. ___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 13:14, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
I'd also like to mention that the article needs to be copyedited before it makes the main page, and have made a request over at WP:GOCE/R. I know that crore is linked in the article, but I'd also suggest that a conversion to USD be added to the article, if only for clarity (remember that not all readers are familiar with lakhs and crores). As the hook fact for ALTs 0 to 2 is no longer in the article, I've struck all of the above; Template:Ping please suggest new hooks if possible, thanks. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:07, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
I would wait till the copyedit is over. RRD (talk) 11:36, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
Symbol possible vote.svg ALT1 still isn't a very good hook. And in any case, this can't continue until the copyediting is done, because right now there are several grammatical issues. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:11, 4 April 2019 (UTC)
The article looks better now but the hooks proposed here are still grammatically incorrect. Do you need assistance in fixing them? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:03, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
Template:Reply yes please. ___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 12:54, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
ALT1a ... that Nepalese Prime Minister Khadga Prasad Oli praised the 2019 sports drama Captain for "delivering patriotism"?
Honestly I don't find the hook or the hook fact spectacular, but I'll let another reviewer take a look at this. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 13:04, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg This is probably worth giving a second look. Requesting a new reviewer. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:39, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg ALT1a is a cute hook. It reminds me of President Donald Trump commenting on everything on his Twitter account. The hook ref is verified and cited inline. But I have added one tag to the cast list, where the name of the character is not provided. Yoninah (talk) 14:02, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
  • That's surprising, considering she is one of the lead actresses. I guess you should comment her out until after the DYK runs. I tweaked ALT1a. Yoninah (talk) 18:18, 18 May 2019 (UTC)