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* ... that '''[[cardiac allograft vasculopathy]]''' is a complication of [[heart transplantation]]?  <small>CAV is a frequent long-term complication of heart transplantation[https://www.ahajournals.org/doi/full/10.1161/CIRCULATIONAHA.117.029753]</small>
 
* ... that '''[[cardiac allograft vasculopathy]]''' is a complication of [[heart transplantation]]?  <small>CAV is a frequent long-term complication of heart transplantation[https://www.ahajournals.org/doi/full/10.1161/CIRCULATIONAHA.117.029753]</small>
*'''ALT1''' ... that '''[[cardiac allograft vasculopathy]]''' is a complication of [[heart transplantation]] that affects up to half of recipients?  
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*'''ALT1''' ... that '''[[cardiac allograft vasculopathy]]''' is a complication of [[heart transplantation]] that affects up to half of recipients within ten years?  
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Deolali transit camp|Deolali transit camp]]
 
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<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:52, 29 January 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:52, 29 January 2019 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Whispyhistory}} This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT0 hook facts are cited inline and the article is neutral. I have added ALT1 as a possible alternative hook. The phrase "in a transplanted heart progressively narrow and lead to dysfunction of the heart muscle or sudden death" occurs in the source and article so perhaps you could rework that bit. Otherwise the article is copyvio-free. A QPQ has been done. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 10:36, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Whispyhistory}} This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT0 hook facts are cited inline and the article is neutral. I have added ALT1 as a possible alternative hook. The phrase "in a transplanted heart progressively narrow and lead to dysfunction of the heart muscle or sudden death" occurs in the source and article so perhaps you could rework that bit. Otherwise the article is copyvio-free. A QPQ has been done. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 10:36, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
 
::*Thanks {{reply|Cwmhiraeth}}. Rephrased as per request. CAV affects upto half of recipients at 10 years. Is that still ok with '''ALT1'''?
 
::*Thanks {{reply|Cwmhiraeth}}. Rephrased as per request. CAV affects upto half of recipients at 10 years. Is that still ok with '''ALT1'''?
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. I have added "within ten years" to ALT1, because in twenty years, it might be more than 50% I suppose. Approving ALT0 (I cannot approve ALT1 because I proposed it). [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 11:58, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
  
 
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Cardiac allograft vasculopathy

Created/expanded by Whispyhistory (talk). Self-nominated at 19:52, 29 January 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT0 hook facts are cited inline and the article is neutral. I have added ALT1 as a possible alternative hook. The phrase "in a transplanted heart progressively narrow and lead to dysfunction of the heart muscle or sudden death" occurs in the source and article so perhaps you could rework that bit. Otherwise the article is copyvio-free. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:36, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
  • Thanks Template:Reply. Rephrased as per request. CAV affects upto half of recipients at 10 years. Is that still ok with ALT1?
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you. I have added "within ten years" to ALT1, because in twenty years, it might be more than 50% I suppose. Approving ALT0 (I cannot approve ALT1 because I proposed it). Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:58, 12 February 2019 (UTC)