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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, adequately sourced, free of close paraphrasing, and has its hook cited inline and verified. While Shake Shack is a fairly well-known restaurant, I'm not sure if it's that famous outside the U.S., so it might be a good idea to either add something else to the hook (i.e. that Carla Lalli Music, who..., was the first general manager at [[Shake Shack]]?) or something to that effect. Alternatively, a hook could also be proposed based on her cooking show (Natalie Portman being a guest might raise attention). Also awaiting a QPQ to be accomplished. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 11:30, 19 October 2019 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, adequately sourced, free of close paraphrasing, and has its hook cited inline and verified. While Shake Shack is a fairly well-known restaurant, I'm not sure if it's that famous outside the U.S., so it might be a good idea to either add something else to the hook (i.e. that Carla Lalli Music, who..., was the first general manager at [[Shake Shack]]?) or something to that effect. Alternatively, a hook could also be proposed based on her cooking show (Natalie Portman being a guest might raise attention). Also awaiting a QPQ to be accomplished. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 11:30, 19 October 2019 (UTC)
 
::* {{reply to|Narutolovehinata5}} QPQ has been completed, and I've added an alternate hook that provides context for who Music is. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 14:35, 19 October 2019 (UTC)
 
::* {{reply to|Narutolovehinata5}} QPQ has been completed, and I've added an alternate hook that provides context for who Music is. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 14:35, 19 October 2019 (UTC)
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::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thanks. As not everyone might be familiar with ''[[Bon Appétit]]'', it might be a good idea to mention "magazine" somewhere in ALT1, but this is optional and up to consensus. In any case there are no more remaining issues, so I am now approving ALT1. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 01:01, 21 October 2019 (UTC)
  
 
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Carla Lalli Music

Created by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:25, 19 October 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough, long enough, adequately sourced, free of close paraphrasing, and has its hook cited inline and verified. While Shake Shack is a fairly well-known restaurant, I'm not sure if it's that famous outside the U.S., so it might be a good idea to either add something else to the hook (i.e. that Carla Lalli Music, who..., was the first general manager at Shake Shack?) or something to that effect. Alternatively, a hook could also be proposed based on her cooking show (Natalie Portman being a guest might raise attention). Also awaiting a QPQ to be accomplished. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:30, 19 October 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Reply to QPQ has been completed, and I've added an alternate hook that provides context for who Music is. Morgan695 (talk) 14:35, 19 October 2019 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Thanks. As not everyone might be familiar with Bon Appétit, it might be a good idea to mention "magazine" somewhere in ALT1, but this is optional and up to consensus. In any case there are no more remaining issues, so I am now approving ALT1. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:01, 21 October 2019 (UTC)