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:::::* Yes, {{yo|Doug Coldwell}} that's definitely better. Looking at he sources, I see Mangan's wording[https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=k-fuBwAAQBAJ&pg=PA230&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false] is "first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church". That is similar to your original hook, in which you used the source accurately, but such inappropriate terminology does make me a little nervous about the reliability of the source.  I'll leave it to the reviewer to decide how significant that is. --[[User:BrownHairedGirl|<span style="color:#663200;">Brown</span>HairedGirl]] <small>[[User talk:BrownHairedGirl|(talk)]] • ([[Special:Contributions/BrownHairedGirl|contribs]])</small> 20:58, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 
:::::* Yes, {{yo|Doug Coldwell}} that's definitely better. Looking at he sources, I see Mangan's wording[https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=k-fuBwAAQBAJ&pg=PA230&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false] is "first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church". That is similar to your original hook, in which you used the source accurately, but such inappropriate terminology does make me a little nervous about the reliability of the source.  I'll leave it to the reviewer to decide how significant that is. --[[User:BrownHairedGirl|<span style="color:#663200;">Brown</span>HairedGirl]] <small>[[User talk:BrownHairedGirl|(talk)]] • ([[Special:Contributions/BrownHairedGirl|contribs]])</small> 20:58, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] - New review needed. --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 11:22, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] - New review needed. --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 11:22, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
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** Starting new review. [[User:Zeete|Zeete]] ([[User talk:Zeete|talk]]) 12:07, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
  
 
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Celia M. Burleigh

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 14:46, 26 January 2018 (UTC).

  • Template:Yo that solves the ambiguity, but it opens up a new problem. Unitarianism says "a Christian theological movement", "Unitarianism does not constitute one single Christian denomination". Unitarianism#United_States says "Unitarian Christian Conference USA is a network of congregations and ministers". So "the Unitarian Church" seems wrong. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:13, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Yes, Template:Yo that's definitely better. Looking at he sources, I see Mangan's wording[1] is "first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church". That is similar to your original hook, in which you used the source accurately, but such inappropriate terminology does make me a little nervous about the reliability of the source. I'll leave it to the reviewer to decide how significant that is. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:58, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg - New review needed. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:22, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
    • Starting new review. Zeete (talk) 12:07, 31 January 2018 (UTC)