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:::::* Yes, {{yo|Doug Coldwell}} that's definitely better. Looking at he sources, I see Mangan's wording[https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=k-fuBwAAQBAJ&pg=PA230&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false] is "first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church". That is similar to your original hook, in which you used the source accurately, but such inappropriate terminology does make me a little nervous about the reliability of the source. I'll leave it to the reviewer to decide how significant that is. --[[User:BrownHairedGirl|<span style="color:#663200;">Brown</span>HairedGirl]] <small>[[User talk:BrownHairedGirl|(talk)]] • ([[Special:Contributions/BrownHairedGirl|contribs]])</small> 20:58, 26 January 2018 (UTC) | :::::* Yes, {{yo|Doug Coldwell}} that's definitely better. Looking at he sources, I see Mangan's wording[https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=k-fuBwAAQBAJ&pg=PA230&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false] is "first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church". That is similar to your original hook, in which you used the source accurately, but such inappropriate terminology does make me a little nervous about the reliability of the source. I'll leave it to the reviewer to decide how significant that is. --[[User:BrownHairedGirl|<span style="color:#663200;">Brown</span>HairedGirl]] <small>[[User talk:BrownHairedGirl|(talk)]] • ([[Special:Contributions/BrownHairedGirl|contribs]])</small> 20:58, 26 January 2018 (UTC) | ||
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] - New review needed. --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 11:22, 28 January 2018 (UTC) | *[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] - New review needed. --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 11:22, 28 January 2018 (UTC) | ||
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Celia M. Burleigh
- ... that Celia M. Burleigh became the first woman pastor ordained into the Unitarian ministry?
- Source 1 Mangan 2015, p. 230 - On October 5, 1871, Burleigh became the first woman ever ordained in Connecticut, as well as the first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church.
- Source 2 Franck 1995, p. 170 - Celia M. Burleigh became the first ordained woman minister in the Unitarian Church, serving in Brooklyn, Connecticut.
- Source 3 Cooke 1902, p. 370 - The first woman ordained to the Unitarian ministry was Mrs. Celia C. Burleigh, who was settled over the parish in Brooklyn, Connecticut, October 5, 1871.
- Source 4 Kane 1997, p. 478 - "The first woman ordained as a Unitarian minister was Celia C. Burleigh, who was given a parish in Brooklyn,CT, on October 5, 1871."
- Source 5 Murdock 1976, p. 49 - The first woman ordained into the Unitarian ministry was Mrs. Celia C. Burleigh who was settled in the parish in Brooklyn, Connecticut on October 5, 1871.
- ALT1:... that ...? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 14:46, 26 January 2018 (UTC).
- Comment. Template:Yo: Both article and hook link to Unitarian Church, which is is a redirect to a long disambiguation page. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 19:04, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Yo Thanks for noting! I have corrected it to a better link. Does that look correct to you?--Doug Coldwell (talk)
- Template:Yo that solves the ambiguity, but it opens up a new problem. Unitarianism says "a Christian theological movement", "Unitarianism does not constitute one single Christian denomination". Unitarianism#United_States says "Unitarian Christian Conference USA is a network of congregations and ministers". So "the Unitarian Church" seems wrong. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:13, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Yo changed to "Unitarian ministry" -> is that better? --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:25, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
- Yes, Template:Yo that's definitely better. Looking at he sources, I see Mangan's wording[1] is "first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church". That is similar to your original hook, in which you used the source accurately, but such inappropriate terminology does make me a little nervous about the reliability of the source. I'll leave it to the reviewer to decide how significant that is. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:58, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
- New review needed. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:22, 28 January 2018 (UTC)