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* ... that '''[[Celia M. Burleigh]]''' became the first woman pastor ordained into the [[Unitarianism|Unitarian ministry]]?   
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* ... that '''[[Celia M. Burleigh]]''' became the first woman pastor ordained into the [[Unitarian Universalism|Unitarian ministry]]?   
 
*Source 1 [https://ctcenterforthebook.org/people/ct-authors/gregg-mangan/ Mangan] 2015, p. 230 - <small> [https://books.google.com/books?id=k-fuBwAAQBAJ&pg=PA230#v=onepage&q&f=false On October 5, 1871, Burleigh became the first woman ever ordained in Connecticut, as well as the first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church.]</small>
 
*Source 1 [https://ctcenterforthebook.org/people/ct-authors/gregg-mangan/ Mangan] 2015, p. 230 - <small> [https://books.google.com/books?id=k-fuBwAAQBAJ&pg=PA230#v=onepage&q&f=false On October 5, 1871, Burleigh became the first woman ever ordained in Connecticut, as well as the first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church.]</small>
 
*Source 2 Franck 1995, p. 170 - <small> [https://books.google.com/books?id=5_wSAQAAMAAJ Celia M. Burleigh became the first ordained woman minister in the Unitarian Church, serving in Brooklyn, Connecticut.]</small>
 
*Source 2 Franck 1995, p. 170 - <small> [https://books.google.com/books?id=5_wSAQAAMAAJ Celia M. Burleigh became the first ordained woman minister in the Unitarian Church, serving in Brooklyn, Connecticut.]</small>
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:*Changed "female" to "woman" for consistency
 
:*Changed "female" to "woman" for consistency
 
::* Do you also want to change "appointed" to "ordained" in the article? Thanks, [[User:Zeete|Zeete]] ([[User talk:Zeete|talk]]) 14:14, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
::* Do you also want to change "appointed" to "ordained" in the article? Thanks, [[User:Zeete|Zeete]] ([[User talk:Zeete|talk]]) 14:14, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
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:::*change "appointed" to "ordained" --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 15:11, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Unitarian Church disambiguation: in particular should this be Unitarian Universalism to match the article [[First Unitarian Congregational Society]] that has red-link to Celia Burleigh? Thanks, [[User:Zeete|Zeete]] ([[User talk:Zeete|talk]]) 12:40, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Unitarian Church disambiguation: in particular should this be Unitarian Universalism to match the article [[First Unitarian Congregational Society]] that has red-link to Celia Burleigh? Thanks, [[User:Zeete|Zeete]] ([[User talk:Zeete|talk]]) 12:40, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
:*Changed Unitarian ministry link to Unitarian Universalism. Also wikified the red link of Celia Bureigh to [[Celia M. Burleigh]].
 
:*Changed Unitarian ministry link to Unitarian Universalism. Also wikified the red link of Celia Bureigh to [[Celia M. Burleigh]].
 
::* Do you want to change the ministry link in the hook above? Thanks, [[User:Zeete|Zeete]] ([[User talk:Zeete|talk]]) 14:14, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
::* Do you want to change the ministry link in the hook above? Thanks, [[User:Zeete|Zeete]] ([[User talk:Zeete|talk]]) 14:14, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
*{{ping|Zeete}} I believe I corrected as you suggested. Will that work? --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 13:46, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
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:::*tweaked hook of ministry link to [[Unitarian Universalism]] --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 15:11, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
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*{{ping|Zeete}} I believe I corrected as you suggested. {{ping|Zeete}} Will that work? --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 13:46, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 15:12, 31 January 2018

Celia M. Burleigh

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 14:46, 26 January 2018 (UTC).

  • Template:Yo that solves the ambiguity, but it opens up a new problem. Unitarianism says "a Christian theological movement", "Unitarianism does not constitute one single Christian denomination". Unitarianism#United_States says "Unitarian Christian Conference USA is a network of congregations and ministers". So "the Unitarian Church" seems wrong. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:13, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Yes, Template:Yo that's definitely better. Looking at he sources, I see Mangan's wording[1] is "first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church". That is similar to your original hook, in which you used the source accurately, but such inappropriate terminology does make me a little nervous about the reliability of the source. I'll leave it to the reviewer to decide how significant that is. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:58, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg - New review needed. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:22, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
    • Starting new review. Zeete (talk) 12:07, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
  • New, long enough per DYK check, over 3,000 length; cited; neutral; also known as Celia Burleigh; Earwig reports violation unlikely, 1.0%; hook interesting, cited, but...
  • Symbol question.svg The article has "first female pastor appointed into the Unitarian ministry", similar but not exactly the same as the hook wording. Sources use "first woman ordained to the Unitarian ministry" Needs to be consistent. Thanks, Zeete (talk) 12:40, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Changed "female" to "woman" for consistency
  • Do you also want to change "appointed" to "ordained" in the article? Thanks, Zeete (talk) 14:14, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Changed Unitarian ministry link to Unitarian Universalism. Also wikified the red link of Celia Bureigh to Celia M. Burleigh.
  • Do you want to change the ministry link in the hook above? Thanks, Zeete (talk) 14:14, 31 January 2018 (UTC)