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|comments    = Having checked off the DYK requirements as satisfied, I am left with one minor quibble. Original hook is cited in lead, but not referred to elsewhere; however, any info in the lead is supposed to be also contained in the main body of the text. I recommend emendment.[[User:Georgejdorner|Georgejdorner]] ([[User talk:Georgejdorner|talk]]) 16:38, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
 
|comments    = Having checked off the DYK requirements as satisfied, I am left with one minor quibble. Original hook is cited in lead, but not referred to elsewhere; however, any info in the lead is supposed to be also contained in the main body of the text. I recommend emendment.[[User:Georgejdorner|Georgejdorner]] ([[User talk:Georgejdorner|talk]]) 16:38, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
 
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:Thanks for the review. The original hook is actually cited in the first sentence of the main body. '''ALT1''' is stated in the lead, but I won't object if someone feels the need to duplicate it under Business. [[User:Fuebaey|Fuebaey]] ([[User talk:Fuebaey|talk]]) 19:56, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 19:57, 14 December 2014

Cereal Killer Cafe

Created by Fuebaey (talk). Self nominated at 19:43, 13 December 2014 (UTC).

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Thanks for the review. The original hook is actually cited in the first sentence of the main body. ALT1 is stated in the lead, but I won't object if someone feels the need to duplicate it under Business. Fuebaey (talk) 19:56, 14 December 2014 (UTC)