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:* Well, it's long enough and it's new enough, but it's not neutral enough. I've made a sample edit so you can have an idea of what I think needs to be done--and I am going to make an edit to the lead as well. So please go through and tweak this, so we can get it up quickly. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 02:32, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 
:* Well, it's long enough and it's new enough, but it's not neutral enough. I've made a sample edit so you can have an idea of what I think needs to be done--and I am going to make an edit to the lead as well. So please go through and tweak this, so we can get it up quickly. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 02:32, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
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::* Thanks {{ping|Drmies}}. I got your point and made some more editing. I hope it is fine now.--'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 03:56, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Chandro Tomar

  • ... that Chandro Tomar, an octogenarian from Johri, has attained fame as an accomplished shooter with 25 national championships and is believed to be the oldest women sharp shooter in the world?

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self nominated at 05:19, 11 March 2015 (UTC).

  • Well, it's long enough and it's new enough, but it's not neutral enough. I've made a sample edit so you can have an idea of what I think needs to be done--and I am going to make an edit to the lead as well. So please go through and tweak this, so we can get it up quickly. Drmies (talk) 02:32, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks Template:Ping. I got your point and made some more editing. I hope it is fine now.--Nvvchar. 03:56, 16 March 2015 (UTC)