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:[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Overall, I like the article, but the hook could be better. How about something like... that '''[[Cherimoya (horse)|Cherimoya]]'s''' unanticipated victory at the 1911 [[Epsom Oaks]] ''(pictured)'', the only start of her career, left "the spectators too dumbfounded to cheer"?--[[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]) 08:02, 18 April 2012 (UTC) | :[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Overall, I like the article, but the hook could be better. How about something like... that '''[[Cherimoya (horse)|Cherimoya]]'s''' unanticipated victory at the 1911 [[Epsom Oaks]] ''(pictured)'', the only start of her career, left "the spectators too dumbfounded to cheer"?--[[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]) 08:02, 18 April 2012 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::* I like the ALT hook. [[User:Froggerlaura|<font color="darkgreen">Froggerlaura</font>]] [[User talk:Froggerlaura|<sup><font color="maroon">ribbit</font>]]</sup> 17:26, 18 April 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 17:26, 18 April 2012
Cherimoya (horse)
- ... that Cherimoya won the 1911 Epsom Oaks (pictured) in the only start of her career?
- Reviewed: John N. Shive
Created/expanded by Froggerlaura (talk). Self nom at 19:30, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
Overall, I like the article, but the hook could be better. How about something like... that Cherimoya's unanticipated victory at the 1911 Epsom Oaks (pictured), the only start of her career, left "the spectators too dumbfounded to cheer"?--KAVEBEAR (talk) 08:02, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
- I like the ALT hook. Froggerlaura ribbit 17:26, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
