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:[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Overall, I like the article, but the hook could be better. How about something like... that '''[[Cherimoya (horse)|Cherimoya]]'s''' unanticipated victory at the 1911 [[Epsom Oaks]] ''(pictured)'', the only start of her career, left "the spectators too dumbfounded to cheer"?--[[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]) 08:02, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
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:[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Overall, I like the article, but the hook could be better. How about something like '''ALT1:''' ... that '''[[Cherimoya (horse)|Cherimoya]]'''{{`s}} unanticipated victory at the 1911 [[Epsom Oaks]] ''(pictured)'', the only start of her career, left "the spectators too dumbfounded to cheer"? --[[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]) 08:02, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
 
::* I like the ALT hook. [[User:Froggerlaura|<font color="darkgreen">Froggerlaura</font>]] [[User talk:Froggerlaura|<sup><font color="maroon">ribbit</font>]]</sup> 17:26, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
 
::* I like the ALT hook. [[User:Froggerlaura|<font color="darkgreen">Froggerlaura</font>]] [[User talk:Froggerlaura|<sup><font color="maroon">ribbit</font>]]</sup> 17:26, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Cherimoya (horse)

Cherimoya winning the 1911 Epsom Oaks in a photograph by C.J. Waters.

Created/expanded by Froggerlaura (talk). Self nom at 19:30, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

Symbol question.svg Overall, I like the article, but the hook could be better. How about something like ALT1: ... that CherimoyaTemplate:`s unanticipated victory at the 1911 Epsom Oaks (pictured), the only start of her career, left "the spectators too dumbfounded to cheer"? --KAVEBEAR (talk) 08:02, 18 April 2012 (UTC)