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− | * ... that soprano '''[[Christina Gerstberger]]''' recorded the role of Lisida in [[E. T. A. Hoffmann]]'s ''Liebe und Eifersucht'' in a performance of the [[Ludwigsburg Festival | + | * ... that soprano '''[[Christina Gerstberger]]''' recorded the role of Lisida in [[E. T. A. Hoffmann]]'s ''Liebe und Eifersucht'' in a performance of the [[Ludwigsburg Festival]]? <small>Source: [http://www.musicweb-international.com/classrev/2011/July11/Hoffmann_7774352.htm]</small> |
:* ''Reviewed'': <s>to come</s> [[Template:Did you know nominations/Saint Dominic in Soriano|Saint Dominic in Soriano]] | :* ''Reviewed'': <s>to come</s> [[Template:Did you know nominations/Saint Dominic in Soriano|Saint Dominic in Soriano]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 10:15, 26 April 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 10:15, 26 April 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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::: Then patience, please. So far, I just translated. The typical German lead is one sentence ;) - Returning from a day out, I have many other things that need to be done. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:08, 17 May 2018 (UTC) | ::: Then patience, please. So far, I just translated. The typical German lead is one sentence ;) - Returning from a day out, I have many other things that need to be done. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:08, 17 May 2018 (UTC) | ||
::: [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]], I expanded the lead. If reader know the writer ETA Hoffman only as the hero of [[Les contes d'Hoffmann]], this would be a good opportunity to learn that he also composed opera ;) - They also should rather look at [[Schloss Ludwigsburg]] for a change than the Gärtnerplatztheater again. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 07:26, 22 May 2018 (UTC) | ::: [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]], I expanded the lead. If reader know the writer ETA Hoffman only as the hero of [[Les contes d'Hoffmann]], this would be a good opportunity to learn that he also composed opera ;) - They also should rather look at [[Schloss Ludwigsburg]] for a change than the Gärtnerplatztheater again. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 07:26, 22 May 2018 (UTC) | ||
+ | :::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thanks for the update. The lead is now sufficiently expanded. About the hook, it looks like ETA Hoffman [https://tools.wmflabs.org/pageviews/?project=en.wikipedia.org&platform=all-access&agent=user&range=latest-20&pages=E._T._A._Hoffmann is quite popular] (it's just I haven't heard of him), the hook appears in the article and is cited, so good to go. I took the liberty of using the English name for [[Ludwigsburg Festival]], I believe this is appropriate because the audience of the hook is international, and the majority of them wouldn't understand German. [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]] ([[User talk:HaEr48|talk]]) 06:03, 8 June 2018 (UTC) | ||
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Christina Gerstberger
- ... that soprano Christina Gerstberger recorded the role of Lisida in E. T. A. Hoffmann's Liebe und Eifersucht in a performance of the Ludwigsburg Festival? Source: [1]
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Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 10:15, 26 April 2018 (UTC).
Created exactly 7 days before nomination, long enough. My concern about the content is that the notability of the subject isn't established. According to WP:LEAD, the lead should "explain why the topic is notable", but the lead right now is just one sentence describing the subject's occupation. The article body reads like a dry resume as well: this isn't a DYK criteria, but please consider improving it. As for the hook, I doubt that it would be interesting to a broad audience. I don't think general international readers can easily relate to E. T. A. Hoffmann or Ludwigsburg Festival. Can you find a more suitable fact? QPQ is in order. HaEr48 (talk) 18:20, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
- Then patience, please. So far, I just translated. The typical German lead is one sentence ;) - Returning from a day out, I have many other things that need to be done. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:08, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
- HaEr48, I expanded the lead. If reader know the writer ETA Hoffman only as the hero of Les contes d'Hoffmann, this would be a good opportunity to learn that he also composed opera ;) - They also should rather look at Schloss Ludwigsburg for a change than the Gärtnerplatztheater again. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:26, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
Thanks for the update. The lead is now sufficiently expanded. About the hook, it looks like ETA Hoffman is quite popular (it's just I haven't heard of him), the hook appears in the article and is cited, so good to go. I took the liberty of using the English name for Ludwigsburg Festival, I believe this is appropriate because the audience of the hook is international, and the majority of them wouldn't understand German. HaEr48 (talk) 06:03, 8 June 2018 (UTC)