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* ... that the dancing shrimp '''''[[Cinetorhynchus rigens]]''''' often takes refuge underneath a [[sea urchin]] or lives in association with a [[sea anemone]]?
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* <s>... that the dancing shrimp '''''[[Cinetorhynchus rigens]]''''' often takes refuge underneath a [[sea urchin]] or lives in association with a [[sea anemone]]?</s>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/London Theatre Studio|London Theatre Studio]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/London Theatre Studio|London Theatre Studio]]
 
<small>Created by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]). Self-nominated at 09:58, 13 December 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]). Self-nominated at 09:58, 13 December 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Hi [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]], review follows: Article created 6 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing; hook is interesting, mentioned in the article; it might be my French but I can find no mention of it taking refuge beneath the ''Diadema antillarum'' in the DORIS source, only that it ''cohabite parfois'' (sometimes coexists/cohabits) with or is ''en présence'' (in the presence) of it? - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 12:49, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Hi [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]], review follows: Article created 6 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing; hook is interesting, mentioned in the article; it might be my French but I can find no mention of it taking refuge beneath the ''Diadema antillarum'' in the DORIS source, only that it ''cohabite parfois'' (sometimes coexists/cohabits) with or is ''en présence'' (in the presence) of it? - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 12:49, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
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::: {{Ping|Dumelow}} Thanks for the review. "avec lequel elle cohabite parfois" seems to imply that it is protected by the association but I have probably gone too far in ALT0, so am suggesting ALT1. Look at this picture. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 14:42, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
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*'''ALT1''' ... that the dancing shrimp '''''[[Cinetorhynchus rigens]]''''' is often associated with [[Diadema antillarum|sea urchins]] or [[sea anemone]]s?
  
 
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Revision as of 14:43, 13 December 2020

Cinetorhynchus rigens

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 09:58, 13 December 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Hi Cwmhiraeth, review follows: Article created 6 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing; hook is interesting, mentioned in the article; it might be my French but I can find no mention of it taking refuge beneath the Diadema antillarum in the DORIS source, only that it cohabite parfois (sometimes coexists/cohabits) with or is en présence (in the presence) of it? - Dumelow (talk) 12:49, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Template:Ping Thanks for the review. "avec lequel elle cohabite parfois" seems to imply that it is protected by the association but I have probably gone too far in ALT0, so am suggesting ALT1. Look at this picture. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:42, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
Diadema antillarum with shrimps sheltering underneath the spines
Diadema antillarum with shrimps sheltering underneath the spines