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:::::Yeah! [[User:Amandajm|Amandajm]] ([[User talk:Amandajm|talk]]) 07:27, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
 
:::::Yeah! [[User:Amandajm|Amandajm]] ([[User talk:Amandajm|talk]]) 07:27, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
 
::::::I think I disagree. I believe heart murmurs are dangerous during times of high physical stress, like competitive basketball. I don't think they are as much of an issue in everyday life.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 22:55, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
 
::::::I think I disagree. I believe heart murmurs are dangerous during times of high physical stress, like competitive basketball. I don't think they are as much of an issue in everyday life.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 22:55, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Needs a full formal DYK review, including all of the usual criteria; should consider previous comments during the process, and also both hooks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 03:05, 31 October 2013 (UTC)
  
 
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Cliff Alexander

  • ... that Cliff Alexander did not play organized basketball until eighth grade because his neighborhood was unsafe?

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 04:35, 5 October 2013 (UTC).

Comment
1. I want to know the biography of this player at the beginning, not the end of the storyline.
Cut'n'paste:
Personal
Alexander's father is 6-foot-7-inch (2.01 m) Clifton Terry, who played basketball for Robeson High School and Kennedy–King College. Following his time at the two-year Kennedy-King, he declared for the 2001 NBA Draft. His professional career included time in the NBA Development League. As of 28 November 2011, he was incarcerated. Cliff picked up basketball late due to the lack of available safe courts to play on in his Chicago West Side neighborhood known as the Brian Piccolo community. Unlike some, he enjoys the recruiting process.
This part needs wording as biography, so it must be written about the son, not the father:
Cliff Alexander is the son of NAME, a HEIGHT basketballer who played for SCHOOL. etc etc. (no need to mention his current incarceration unless you are writing Terry's bio). Cliff picked up basketball late (This is the point to mention 8th Grade). etc etc etc
I don't understand your first point. I feel some of my pronouns may have been confusing. I have changed those. Let me know if your concern remains.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:54, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
2. The lead section is fine.
3. If a heart murmur affected Alexander's career, then it needs mentioning in this Biography section, not just in the section about his varsity career.
Amandajm (talk) 05:34, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
You want it both in the varsity career and the personal section?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:54, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
Yeah! Amandajm (talk) 07:27, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
I think I disagree. I believe heart murmurs are dangerous during times of high physical stress, like competitive basketball. I don't think they are as much of an issue in everyday life.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:55, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Needs a full formal DYK review, including all of the usual criteria; should consider previous comments during the process, and also both hooks. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:05, 31 October 2013 (UTC)