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* ... that the '''[[Cola nitida|kola nut]]''' is used in the manufacture of both [[cola]] drinks and [[chocolate]] with a high melting point?
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Revision as of 11:43, 29 January 2015

Cola nitida

  • ... that the kola nut is used in the manufacture of both cola drinks and chocolate that has a high melting point?

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 06:18, 23 January 2015 (UTC).

  • Checks OK for newness, length, and is neutral. Not only that, the prose is clear and informative! Hook is sourced, and indeed this is the sort of thing which everyone ought to know (I didn't). Hook length OK. QPQ undertaken. Symbol confirmed.svg OK to go!!--Smerus (talk) 17:11, 25 January 2015 (UTC)
It seems Ok to me. There are occasional words (e.g. 'fibrous') which have been reused but I would say acceptable overall. Some paraphrasing but not too close to give concern.--Smerus (talk) 06:39, 29 January 2015 (UTC)