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imported>Renamed user mou89p43twvqcvm8ut9w3
(Nominating Corbin Sharun.)
 
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(good to go; could use a hookier hook)
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Dates are good, expansion is more than adequate, tone is neutral, citations are sufficient for DYK, appears to avoid close paraphrasing, QPQ is satisfied, hook fact is properly cited and factual but could be more interesting. Player scores a touchdown on a blown play? Nice. Player scores ''his only CFL career touchdown'' on a blown play? Fascinating. It's all good otherwise so I'm applying the green check but your article would be better served if you (or any interested editor) would propose a hookier ALT1. I'll come running to check it out if you do. - [[User:Dravecky|Dravecky]] ([[User talk:Dravecky|talk]]) 00:43, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 00:43, 3 August 2015

Corbin Sharun

5x expanded by BU Rob13 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:15, 1 August 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Dates are good, expansion is more than adequate, tone is neutral, citations are sufficient for DYK, appears to avoid close paraphrasing, QPQ is satisfied, hook fact is properly cited and factual but could be more interesting. Player scores a touchdown on a blown play? Nice. Player scores his only CFL career touchdown on a blown play? Fascinating. It's all good otherwise so I'm applying the green check but your article would be better served if you (or any interested editor) would propose a hookier ALT1. I'll come running to check it out if you do. - Dravecky (talk) 00:43, 3 August 2015 (UTC)