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:* {{ping|Gaff}} Hook just not interesting enough - there are many monotypic genera. Please suggest alternatives not invoving monotypic genus status.
 
:* {{ping|Gaff}} Hook just not interesting enough - there are many monotypic genera. Please suggest alternatives not invoving monotypic genus status.
 
:* Please use [[Template:Convert]] for depth range to show depth both in feet and meters.
 
:* Please use [[Template:Convert]] for depth range to show depth both in feet and meters.
:* The word "Ref Ref. 90102" shows sloppy cut & paste from Fishbase. Please be careful, it also implies that copyvio issues may exist. [[User:AshLin|AshLin]] ([[User talk:AshLin|talk]]) 14:19, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
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:* The superfluous words "Ref Ref. 90102" shows sloppy cut & paste from Fishbase. Please be careful, it also implies that copyvio/close paraphrasing issues may exist. [[User:AshLin|AshLin]] ([[User talk:AshLin|talk]]) 14:19, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
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:** Yes, there are close paraphrasing issues - " a single pore above and below the raised median canal on each pored lateral line scale", please rephrase this.
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:** "color patterns present on the head body and vertical fins and"
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:** "apogonichthys foa fowleria and neamia"
 
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Revision as of 14:25, 18 October 2014

Ozichthys albimaculosus

Created/expanded by Gaff (talk). Self nominated at 21:14, 28 September 2014 (UTC).

  • Began review, new enough, long enough. AshLin (talk) 11:36, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Info clumped up, seperated it into sections, makes it more readable. Done.
  • Template:Ping Hook just not interesting enough - there are many monotypic genera. Please suggest alternatives not invoving monotypic genus status.
  • Please use Template:Convert for depth range to show depth both in feet and meters.
  • The superfluous words "Ref Ref. 90102" shows sloppy cut & paste from Fishbase. Please be careful, it also implies that copyvio/close paraphrasing issues may exist. AshLin (talk) 14:19, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
    • Yes, there are close paraphrasing issues - " a single pore above and below the raised median canal on each pored lateral line scale", please rephrase this.
    • "color patterns present on the head body and vertical fins and"
    • "apogonichthys foa fowleria and neamia"