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:* '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Cynthia Cooke]]''' helped thousands of Punjabi and Australian prisoners of war in the Far East?
 
:* '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Cynthia Cooke]]''' helped thousands of Punjabi and Australian prisoners of war in the Far East?
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:* '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Cynthia Cooke]]''' became head of the [[Queen Alexandra's Royal Naval Nursing Service]] after years of helping [[Far East prisoners of war]]?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Medical Women's Federation ]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Medical Women's Federation ]]
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:45, 4 July 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:45, 4 July 2016 (UTC).</small>
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting bio, on few but good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hooks: I think the original is too incidental and does no justice to her achievements, the ALT too broad in scope. I suggest you mention [[Queen Alexandra's Royal Naval Nursing Service]] (hooky in a way) and something small and specific in addition (could be one of the two). Other questions: Why do you have the quotes italic? How do you feel about an infobox? Can you combine the one-sentence-para with another? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:38, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting bio, on few but good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hooks: I think the original is too incidental and does no justice to her achievements, the ALT too broad in scope. I suggest you mention [[Queen Alexandra's Royal Naval Nursing Service]] (hooky in a way) and something small and specific in addition (could be one of the two). Other questions: Why do you have the quotes italic? How do you feel about an infobox? Can you combine the one-sentence-para with another? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:38, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
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::I've added a new alt, should be better. I have the quotes in italic because... that's the way I learned to do it in University. No other reason really! I'll look into an infobox now and will try and sort out the paragraph. [[User:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Message me]]) 23:28, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 23:28, 7 July 2016

Cynthia Cooke

  • ... that Cynthia Cooke "did fail to perform the deep and graceful traditional curtsy due, thereby insulting the First Lord of the Admiralty", and was punished by being ducked underwater?

5x expanded by Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry (talk). Self-nominated at 14:45, 4 July 2016 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Interesting bio, on few but good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hooks: I think the original is too incidental and does no justice to her achievements, the ALT too broad in scope. I suggest you mention Queen Alexandra's Royal Naval Nursing Service (hooky in a way) and something small and specific in addition (could be one of the two). Other questions: Why do you have the quotes italic? How do you feel about an infobox? Can you combine the one-sentence-para with another? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:38, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
I've added a new alt, should be better. I have the quotes in italic because... that's the way I learned to do it in University. No other reason really! I'll look into an infobox now and will try and sort out the paragraph. Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry (Message me) 23:28, 7 July 2016 (UTC)