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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:The Squirrel Conspiracy|The Squirrel Conspiracy]] ([[User talk:The Squirrel Conspiracy|talk]])&nbsp;06:51, 1 September 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that to raise desperately needed money, the first president of [[Pomona College]], '''[[Cyrus G. Baldwin]]''' ''(pictured)'', built [[Pomona Water Powerplant|the first hydroelectric power station]] with [[Electric power transmission|high-voltage transmission]] in California in 1892? <small>Source: [https://www.pomona.edu/timeline/1890s/1891][http://www.lawesterners.org/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/203-SPRING-1996.pdf]</small>
 
* ... that to raise desperately needed money, the first president of [[Pomona College]], '''[[Cyrus G. Baldwin]]''' ''(pictured)'', built [[Pomona Water Powerplant|the first hydroelectric power station]] with [[Electric power transmission|high-voltage transmission]] in California in 1892? <small>Source: [https://www.pomona.edu/timeline/1890s/1891][http://www.lawesterners.org/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/203-SPRING-1996.pdf]</small>
 
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<small>5x expanded by [[User:Sdkb|Sdkb]] ([[User talk:Sdkb|talk]]). Self-nominated at 08:29, 10 August 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Sdkb|Sdkb]] ([[User talk:Sdkb|talk]]). Self-nominated at 08:29, 10 August 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] 5x expansion confirmed. QPQ done. Some slight paraphrasing picked up by Earwig. Hook as written is not reflected in article. New hook needed, or article needs to be edited to reflect hook. --[[User:evrik|evrik]]&nbsp;<sup>([[User talk:evrik|talk]])</sup> 17:35, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] 5x expansion confirmed. QPQ done. Some slight paraphrasing picked up by Earwig. Hook as written is not reflected in article. New hook needed, or article needs to be edited to reflect hook. --[[User:evrik|evrik]]&nbsp;<sup>([[User talk:evrik|talk]])</sup> 17:35, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
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:::*:{{re|evrik}} Fixed. And regarding Earwig, it's [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=&oldid=972147949&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 main concern] (18% probability) is a quote. The removal of the stub tag earlier confusing [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Cyrus+G.+Baldwin&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 switched] its main concern to the Branding Iron piece (17%), where it picked up things like "he graduated from Oberlin College" and "San Antonio Light and Power Company"; those are not copyrightable phrases. I made a [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cyrus_G._Baldwin&type=revision&diff=972660056&oldid=972658334&diffmode=source small tweak] that has earwig more satisfied re Branding Iron, but there's nothing I can do to change a quote. <span style="color:#AAA"><small>&#123;{u&#124;</small><span style="border-radius:9em;padding:0 5px;background:#088">[[User:Sdkb|<span style="color:#FFF">'''Sdkb'''</span>]]</span><small>}&#125;</small></span> <sup>[[User talk:Sdkb|'''talk''']]</sup> 06:55, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
 
:::*:{{re|evrik}} Fixed. And regarding Earwig, it's [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=&oldid=972147949&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 main concern] (18% probability) is a quote. The removal of the stub tag earlier confusing [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Cyrus+G.+Baldwin&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 switched] its main concern to the Branding Iron piece (17%), where it picked up things like "he graduated from Oberlin College" and "San Antonio Light and Power Company"; those are not copyrightable phrases. I made a [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cyrus_G._Baldwin&type=revision&diff=972660056&oldid=972658334&diffmode=source small tweak] that has earwig more satisfied re Branding Iron, but there's nothing I can do to change a quote. <span style="color:#AAA"><small>&#123;{u&#124;</small><span style="border-radius:9em;padding:0 5px;background:#088">[[User:Sdkb|<span style="color:#FFF">'''Sdkb'''</span>]]</span><small>}&#125;</small></span> <sup>[[User talk:Sdkb|'''talk''']]</sup> 06:55, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]--[[User:evrik|evrik]]&nbsp;<sup>([[User talk:evrik|talk]])</sup> 16:52, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]--[[User:evrik|evrik]]&nbsp;<sup>([[User talk:evrik|talk]])</sup> 16:52, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
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Revision as of 06:51, 1 September 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 06:51, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

Cyrus G. Baldwin

Cyrus G. Baldwin
Cyrus G. Baldwin

5x expanded by Sdkb (talk). Self-nominated at 08:29, 10 August 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg 5x expansion confirmed. QPQ done. Some slight paraphrasing picked up by Earwig. Hook as written is not reflected in article. New hook needed, or article needs to be edited to reflect hook. --evrik (talk) 17:35, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:U, thanks for the review! The current text in the article is Template:Tq Is 1892 the part that you find missing? We could add that to the article fairly easily. {{u|Sdkb}}talk 02:27, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
  • The line, "to raise desperately needed money" is not in the article. Also, can you look at the close paraphrasing? --evrik (talk) 03:54, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
    Template:Re Fixed. And regarding Earwig, it's main concern (18% probability) is a quote. The removal of the stub tag earlier confusing switched its main concern to the Branding Iron piece (17%), where it picked up things like "he graduated from Oberlin College" and "San Antonio Light and Power Company"; those are not copyrightable phrases. I made a small tweak that has earwig more satisfied re Branding Iron, but there's nothing I can do to change a quote. {{u|Sdkb}}talk 06:55, 13 August 2020 (UTC)