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::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hate to be a wet blanket and all, but this article fails [[Wikipedia:Did you know/Supplementary guidelines|Supplementary guideline D2]] [[User:Manxruler|Manxruler]] ([[User talk:Manxruler|talk]]) 15:47, 6 March 2013 (UTC) | ::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hate to be a wet blanket and all, but this article fails [[Wikipedia:Did you know/Supplementary guidelines|Supplementary guideline D2]] [[User:Manxruler|Manxruler]] ([[User talk:Manxruler|talk]]) 15:47, 6 March 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::::*Thanks for pointing at insufficient inline citations; I also notice that the expander of the article now has provided inline citations to every section. I listed a book about the hotel as a possible further source. [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) 09:53, 7 March 2013 (UTC) | :::::*Thanks for pointing at insufficient inline citations; I also notice that the expander of the article now has provided inline citations to every section. I listed a book about the hotel as a possible further source. [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) 09:53, 7 March 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Dalen Hotel
- ... that Dalen Hotel (pictured) is among the best preserved wooden hotels from the 19th century?
- Reviewed: NA
5x expanded by Strachkvas (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 08:38, 6 March 2013 (UTC).
5X expansion good. Hook checks out even though source is in Norwegian (Google translate verified hook). Suggest alternate hook to include location of hotel:
- ALT1: ... that Dalen Hotel (pictured) in Dalen, Telemark, Norway is among the best preserved wooden hotels from the 19th century?
- --Mike Cline (talk) 13:38, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, and for providing an alternative hook! I checked your suggested alt hook with location, and corrected the link to "Dalen". If this hook is used, I also propose to de-link the country name (Norway), and possibly move (pictured) to appear directly after the bolded Dalen Hotel. Oceanh (talk) 14:49, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
Hate to be a wet blanket and all, but this article fails Supplementary guideline D2 Manxruler (talk) 15:47, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
Needs reviewer to confirm that article conforms to DYK rules and ALT hook is valid (new reviewer needed for ALT hook). BlueMoonset (talk) 03:04, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
