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{{*mp}}... that '''[[Dalen Hotel]]''' ''(pictured)''  is among the best preserved wooden hotels from the 19th century?
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:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  Needs reviewer to confirm that article conforms to DYK rules and ALT hook is valid (new reviewer needed for ALT hook). [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 03:04, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  Needs reviewer to confirm that article conforms to DYK rules and ALT hook is valid (new reviewer needed for ALT hook). [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 03:04, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
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::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] AGF for foreign-language hook fact.  Expansion was recent and plenty long enough. No close paraphrasing detected (looked at two sources).  Suitably referenced. ALT1 is good to go. '''<font color="#000000">[[User:Schwede66|Schwede]]</font><font color="#FF4500">[[User talk:Schwede66|66]]</font>''' 04:55, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 04:55, 15 March 2013

Dalen Hotel

Large wooden hotell building from the 19th century

  • ... that Dalen Hotel (pictured) is among the best preserved wooden hotels from the 19th century?
  • Reviewed: NA

5x expanded by Strachkvas (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 08:38, 6 March 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg 5X expansion good. Hook checks out even though source is in Norwegian (Google translate verified hook). Suggest alternate hook to include location of hotel:
  • ALT1: ... that Dalen Hotel (pictured) in Dalen, Telemark, Norway is among the best preserved wooden hotels from the 19th century?
--Mike Cline (talk) 13:38, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
  • Thank you for the review, and for providing an alternative hook! I checked your suggested alt hook with location, and corrected the link to "Dalen". If this hook is used, I also propose to de-link the country name (Norway), and possibly move (pictured) to appear directly after the bolded Dalen Hotel. Oceanh (talk) 14:49, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for pointing at insufficient inline citations; I also notice that the expander of the article now has provided inline citations to every section. I listed a book about the hotel as a possible further source. Oceanh (talk) 09:53, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote4.png Needs reviewer to confirm that article conforms to DYK rules and ALT hook is valid (new reviewer needed for ALT hook). BlueMoonset (talk) 03:04, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg AGF for foreign-language hook fact. Expansion was recent and plenty long enough. No close paraphrasing detected (looked at two sources). Suitably referenced. ALT1 is good to go. Schwede66 04:55, 15 March 2013 (UTC)