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* ... that after spending time in Sarajevo, Lyon and The Gambia teaching, chasing criminals and serial killers, '''[[David Asante-Apeatu]]''' is now the [[Inspector General of Police|highest ranking police officer]] in Ghana?  <small>Source: [http://www.ghanacelebrities.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/01/CV_Asante-Apeatu.pdf this] and [http://www.ghanaweb.com/GhanaHomePage/NewsArchive/Profile-of-Acting-IGP-David-Asante-Apeatu-504025 that]</small>
 
* ... that after spending time in Sarajevo, Lyon and The Gambia teaching, chasing criminals and serial killers, '''[[David Asante-Apeatu]]''' is now the [[Inspector General of Police|highest ranking police officer]] in Ghana?  <small>Source: [http://www.ghanacelebrities.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/01/CV_Asante-Apeatu.pdf this] and [http://www.ghanaweb.com/GhanaHomePage/NewsArchive/Profile-of-Acting-IGP-David-Asante-Apeatu-504025 that]</small>
::*'''ALT1''' ... that '''[[David Asante-Apeatu]]''', a former Inspector of Factories, once oversaw an operation seized 588 kilograms of cocaine worth $38 million?
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::*'''ALT1''' ... that '''[[David Asante-Apeatu]]''', a former Inspector of Factories, once oversaw an operation that lead to the seizure 588 kilograms of cocaine worth millions of dollars?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Drop the Dip]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Drop the Dip]]
 
<small>Created by [[User:Crosstemplejay|Crosstemplejay]] ([[User talk:Crosstemplejay|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:36, 28 June 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Crosstemplejay|Crosstemplejay]] ([[User talk:Crosstemplejay|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:36, 28 June 2017 (UTC).</small>

Revision as of 16:40, 13 July 2017

David Asante-Apeatu

  • ALT1 ... that David Asante-Apeatu, a former Inspector of Factories, once oversaw an operation that lead to the seizure 588 kilograms of cocaine worth millions of dollars?

Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 12:36, 28 June 2017 (UTC).

  • Oppose The article reads like a CV. Furthermore, the proposed hook is poor. The article doesn't mention teaching, it trivialises police work, and as if that wasn't enough, the hook is essentially telling us that a policeman does police work and has a rank. You don't say. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 09:39, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Though I do not agree with your assertion that the article reads like a CV, I have reworded certain sections of it and proposed an alternative hook. It is sometimes very difficulty writing an African article to be like a Western article due largely to lack of extensive coverage on penitent issues and individuals. Please go through and offer your opinion. CrossTemple Jay 16:38, 13 July 2017 (UTC)