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{{*mp}}... that the medieval [[Bishop of St David's]] '''[[David fitzGerald]]''', the uncle of the writer [[Gerald of Wales]], was responsible for arranging his nephew's education?
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{{*mp}}... that the medieval [[Bishop of St David's]] '''[[David fitzGerald]]''', uncle of the writer [[Gerald of Wales]], was responsible for arranging his nephew's education?  
 
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:*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Date, length verified, AGFed on the hook and the paraphrasing. I would like to see the colloquialism "a bit murky" replaced with something a bit more elegant, but that's not a major issue. The hook also seems a bit bland to me, so, if I may, Imna propose another (that I think someone else will have to approve?):
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::*ALT 1: ... that, in exchange for securing [[Wales|Welsh]] interests within the [[Bishop of St David's|See of St David's]], Bishop '''[[David fitzGerald]]''' renounced efforts for its elevation into an archbishopric? [[User:Dahn|Dahn]] ([[User talk:Dahn|talk]]) 18:16, 16 March 2012 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Revision as of 18:16, 16 March 2012

David fitzGerald

Created/expanded by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 15:47, 7 March 2012 (UTC)

  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Date, length verified, AGFed on the hook and the paraphrasing. I would like to see the colloquialism "a bit murky" replaced with something a bit more elegant, but that's not a major issue. The hook also seems a bit bland to me, so, if I may, Imna propose another (that I think someone else will have to approve?):