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− | {{*mp}}... that the medieval [[Bishop of St David's]] '''[[David fitzGerald]]''', | + | {{*mp}}... that the medieval [[Bishop of St David's]] '''[[David fitzGerald]]''', uncle of the writer [[Gerald of Wales]], was responsible for arranging his nephew's education? |
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− | :* | + | :*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Date, length verified, AGFed on the hook and the paraphrasing. I would like to see the colloquialism "a bit murky" replaced with something a bit more elegant, but that's not a major issue. The hook also seems a bit bland to me, so, if I may, Imna propose another (that I think someone else will have to approve?): |
+ | ::*ALT 1: ... that, in exchange for securing [[Wales|Welsh]] interests within the [[Bishop of St David's|See of St David's]], Bishop '''[[David fitzGerald]]''' renounced efforts for its elevation into an archbishopric? [[User:Dahn|Dahn]] ([[User talk:Dahn|talk]]) 18:16, 16 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 18:16, 16 March 2012
David fitzGerald
- ... that the medieval Bishop of St David's David fitzGerald, uncle of the writer Gerald of Wales, was responsible for arranging his nephew's education?
Created/expanded by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 15:47, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
Date, length verified, AGFed on the hook and the paraphrasing. I would like to see the colloquialism "a bit murky" replaced with something a bit more elegant, but that's not a major issue. The hook also seems a bit bland to me, so, if I may, Imna propose another (that I think someone else will have to approve?):
- ALT 1: ... that, in exchange for securing Welsh interests within the See of St David's, Bishop David fitzGerald renounced efforts for its elevation into an archbishopric? Dahn (talk) 18:16, 16 March 2012 (UTC)