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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I struck the first hook because it makes her second. But ALT1 is adequate, but a little flat. Perhaps you want to add that it was a newly created position? Too bad you don't have any more details about her personal life. Only one QPQ is needed for this nomination, so please save the second for another time. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:21, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I struck the first hook because it makes her second. ALT1 is adequate, but a little flat as a hook. Perhaps you want to add that it was a newly created position? Too bad you don't have any more details about her personal life from which to draw more hook information. Only one QPQ is needed for this nomination, so please save the second for another time. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:21, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 19:22, 7 June 2020

Dawn Aponte

Created by Eagles247 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:47, 7 June 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I struck the first hook because it makes her second. ALT1 is adequate, but a little flat as a hook. Perhaps you want to add that it was a newly created position? Too bad you don't have any more details about her personal life from which to draw more hook information. Only one QPQ is needed for this nomination, so please save the second for another time. Yoninah (talk) 19:21, 7 June 2020 (UTC)