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<small>Created by [[User:Alansohn|Alansohn]] ([[User talk:Alansohn|talk]]). Self-nominated at 21:21, 14 September 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Alansohn|Alansohn]] ([[User talk:Alansohn|talk]]). Self-nominated at 21:21, 14 September 2016 (UTC).</small>
  
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Alansohn}} Date and length fine. However I do have a quibble with the hook. The hook claims he proposed the bill but the article says he sponsored it which I am not too sure are synonymous in political terms. I'd feel much more comfortable if the hook was more consistent with the article before I pass this. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E  </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 19:00, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Alansohn}} Date and length fine. However I do have a quibble with the hook. The hook claims he proposed the bill but the article says he sponsored it which I am not too sure are synonymous in political terms. I'd feel much more comfortable if the hook was more consistent with the article before I pass this. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<span style="color:red;">The C of E  </span><span style="color:blue;"> God Save the Queen!</span>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<span style="color:darkblue;">talk</span>]])</span> 19:00, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|The C of E}}, fair enough. I've added ALT1, above using "sponsoring" (rather than "proposing"), and still stayed under the hook limit. [[User:Alansohn|Alansohn]] ([[User talk:Alansohn|talk]]) 19:18, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|The C of E}}, fair enough. I've added ALT1, above using "sponsoring" (rather than "proposing"), and still stayed under the hook limit. [[User:Alansohn|Alansohn]] ([[User talk:Alansohn|talk]]) 19:18, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Much better. Hook 199 characters, QPQ done, no close paraphrasing. Good to go. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E  </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 19:22, 16 September 2016 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Much better. Hook 199 characters, QPQ done, no close paraphrasing. Good to go. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<span style="color:red;">The C of E  </span><span style="color:blue;"> God Save the Queen!</span>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<span style="color:darkblue;">talk</span>]])</span> 19:22, 16 September 2016 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  MPJ-DK  01:02, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

Dennis L. Riley

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self-nominated at 21:21, 14 September 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping Date and length fine. However I do have a quibble with the hook. The hook claims he proposed the bill but the article says he sponsored it which I am not too sure are synonymous in political terms. I'd feel much more comfortable if the hook was more consistent with the article before I pass this. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 19:00, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping, fair enough. I've added ALT1, above using "sponsoring" (rather than "proposing"), and still stayed under the hook limit. Alansohn (talk) 19:18, 16 September 2016 (UTC)