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:*Other than that, looks good. '''[[User:Go Phightins!|<font color="blue">Go</font>]] [[User talk:Go Phightins!|<font color="#E90004">''Phightins''</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Go Phightins!|<font color="#008504">!</font>]]''' 16:38, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 
:*Other than that, looks good. '''[[User:Go Phightins!|<font color="blue">Go</font>]] [[User talk:Go Phightins!|<font color="#E90004">''Phightins''</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Go Phightins!|<font color="#008504">!</font>]]''' 16:38, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 
::: Per your suggestion, I have added a description in the article of what the "Class of 2013" means.  The article already mentions that Green is playing for the Michigan Wolverines.  Not room to fit everything into the hook -- I generally try to make hooks as short as I can. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 16:53, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 
::: Per your suggestion, I have added a description in the article of what the "Class of 2013" means.  The article already mentions that Green is playing for the Michigan Wolverines.  Not room to fit everything into the hook -- I generally try to make hooks as short as I can. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 16:53, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
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::::What if the hook read, that ... rated the No. 1 [[running back]] in the college football recruiting Class of ... ? '''[[User:Go Phightins!|<font color="blue">Go</font>]] [[User talk:Go Phightins!|<font color="#E90004">''Phightins''</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Go Phightins!|<font color="#008504">!</font>]]''' 16:59, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
 
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Derrick Green (American football)

  • ... that Derrick Green, rated the No. 1 running back in the Class of 2013, has been described as follows: "Look at him from the back and the side, he's a huge human being"?

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nominated at 00:30, 20 August 2013 (UTC).

  • A few things of slight concern:
  • not everyone is going to know what the Class of 2013 is - clarify
  • perhaps you should mention that he is playing for the Michigan Wolverines
  • Other than that, looks good. Go Phightins! 16:38, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
Per your suggestion, I have added a description in the article of what the "Class of 2013" means. The article already mentions that Green is playing for the Michigan Wolverines. Not room to fit everything into the hook -- I generally try to make hooks as short as I can. Cbl62 (talk) 16:53, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
What if the hook read, that ... rated the No. 1 running back in the college football recruiting Class of ... ? Go Phightins! 16:59, 31 August 2013 (UTC)