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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I believe you need a new ALT hook...the current hook is grammatically incorrect and needs to be revised in order for us to continue with the review process. At this stage, it simply doesn't make sense. [[User:Proudbolsahye|Proudbolsahye]] ([[User talk:Proudbolsahye|talk]]) 07:14, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I believe you need a new ALT hook...the current hook is grammatically incorrect and needs to be revised in order for us to continue with the review process. At this stage, it simply doesn't make sense. [[User:Proudbolsahye|Proudbolsahye]] ([[User talk:Proudbolsahye|talk]]) 07:14, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
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::*Thank you for commenting on the hook, pointing out grammar problems. I have suggested two alt hooks below. [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) 08:46, 18 April 2013 (UTC)
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:{{*mp}} <b>ALT1</b>:... that [[riddim]] composer '''[[Di Genius]]''' had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004?
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:{{*mp}} <b>ALT2</b>:... that [[riddim]] composer '''[[Di Genius]]''' had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004, when he was 14 years old?
  
 
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Revision as of 08:46, 18 April 2013

Di Genius

  • ... that Di Genius had his first riddim hits in Jamaica in 2004, 14 years old?
  • Reviewed: NA

Created by Strachkvas (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 14:09, 15 April 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg I believe you need a new ALT hook...the current hook is grammatically incorrect and needs to be revised in order for us to continue with the review process. At this stage, it simply doesn't make sense. Proudbolsahye (talk) 07:14, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
  • Thank you for commenting on the hook, pointing out grammar problems. I have suggested two alt hooks below. Oceanh (talk) 08:46, 18 April 2013 (UTC)
  • ALT1:... that riddim composer Di Genius had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004?
  • ALT2:... that riddim composer Di Genius had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004, when he was 14 years old?