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:{{*mp}} <b>ALT1</b>:... that [[riddim]] composer '''[[Di Genius]]''' had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004?
 
:{{*mp}} <b>ALT1</b>:... that [[riddim]] composer '''[[Di Genius]]''' had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004?
 
:{{*mp}} <b>ALT2</b>:... that [[riddim]] composer '''[[Di Genius]]''' had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004, when he was 14 years old?
 
:{{*mp}} <b>ALT2</b>:... that [[riddim]] composer '''[[Di Genius]]''' had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004, when he was 14 years old?
 
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::[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] ALT1 seems to be boring, but ALT2 looks fine. However, there are some other issues here. The hook is not in the article. It does say Di Genius was in high school, but doesn't state his age at the time. Ref 9 indeed backs up some artists Di Genius worked with, but not all of them. Same thing for the line about who he's collobarated with; not all artists are in the sources. Furthermore, I would like to see his birth date and place properly referenced. '''<span style="color:#880000;">—♦♦ </span>[[User:Amberrock|<span style="color:#880000;">''AMBER''</span>]][[User talk:Amberrock|<span style="color:#FF6600;"><sup>(ЯʘCK)</sup></span>]]''' 16:21, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 16:21, 30 April 2013

Di Genius

  • ... that Di Genius had his first riddim hits in Jamaica in 2004, 14 years old?
  • Reviewed: NA

Created by Strachkvas (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 14:09, 15 April 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg I believe you need a new ALT hook...the current hook is grammatically incorrect and needs to be revised in order for us to continue with the review process. At this stage, it simply doesn't make sense. Proudbolsahye (talk) 07:14, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
  • Thank you for commenting on the hook, pointing out grammar problems. I have suggested two alt hooks below. Oceanh (talk) 08:46, 18 April 2013 (UTC)
  • ALT1:... that riddim composer Di Genius had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004?
  • ALT2:... that riddim composer Di Genius had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004, when he was 14 years old?
Symbol possible vote.svg ALT1 seems to be boring, but ALT2 looks fine. However, there are some other issues here. The hook is not in the article. It does say Di Genius was in high school, but doesn't state his age at the time. Ref 9 indeed backs up some artists Di Genius worked with, but not all of them. Same thing for the line about who he's collobarated with; not all artists are in the sources. Furthermore, I would like to see his birth date and place properly referenced. —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 16:21, 30 April 2013 (UTC)