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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:00, 14 September 2019 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ...<s> that '''[[Dogū with palms pressed together|an old dogū]]''' ([[National Treasure (Japan)|NT]]) ''(pictured)'' has been exhibited at the [[British Museum]] and [[Tokyo National Museum]]? </s> <small>Source: [https://www.britishmuseum.org/about_us/news_and_press/press_releases/2009/the_power_of_dogu.aspx BM] [https://www.tnm.jp/modules/r_free_page/index.php?id=1906&lang=en TNM] (catalogue no. 83 in linked pdf)</small>
 
* ...<s> that '''[[Dogū with palms pressed together|an old dogū]]''' ([[National Treasure (Japan)|NT]]) ''(pictured)'' has been exhibited at the [[British Museum]] and [[Tokyo National Museum]]? </s> <small>Source: [https://www.britishmuseum.org/about_us/news_and_press/press_releases/2009/the_power_of_dogu.aspx BM] [https://www.tnm.jp/modules/r_free_page/index.php?id=1906&lang=en TNM] (catalogue no. 83 in linked pdf)</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Wang Guodong (painter)]] ([[Template:Did you know nominations/Wang Guodong (painter)|here]])
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Wang Guodong (painter)]] ([[Template:Did you know nominations/Wang Guodong (painter)|here]])
 
<small>Created by [[User:Maculosae tegmine lyncis|Maculosae tegmine lyncis]] ([[User talk:Maculosae tegmine lyncis|talk]]). Self-nominated at 21:40, 3 September 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Maculosae tegmine lyncis|Maculosae tegmine lyncis]] ([[User talk:Maculosae tegmine lyncis|talk]]). Self-nominated at 21:40, 3 September 2019 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Very interesting new article and great photo, but I think the hook could be made more interesting to match the object. To me the fact that it's one of the only five dogu that have been designated Japan's national treasures is far more interesting than where it's been exhibited. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 23:04, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Very interesting new article and great photo, but I think the hook could be made more interesting to match the object. To me the fact that it's one of the only five dogu that have been designated Japan's national treasures is far more interesting than where it's been exhibited. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 23:04, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
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::::Hello, I've added a citation for the measurements, thanks, [[User:Maculosae tegmine lyncis|Maculosae tegmine lyncis]] ([[User talk:Maculosae tegmine lyncis|talk]]) 22:54, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
 
::::Hello, I've added a citation for the measurements, thanks, [[User:Maculosae tegmine lyncis|Maculosae tegmine lyncis]] ([[User talk:Maculosae tegmine lyncis|talk]]) 22:54, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. Restoring tick per Zanhe's review. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:59, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. Restoring tick per Zanhe's review. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:59, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
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Revision as of 23:00, 14 September 2019

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:00, 14 September 2019 (UTC)

Dogū with palms pressed together

Jōmon dogū
Jōmon dogū

Created by Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk). Self-nominated at 21:40, 3 September 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Very interesting new article and great photo, but I think the hook could be made more interesting to match the object. To me the fact that it's one of the only five dogu that have been designated Japan's national treasures is far more interesting than where it's been exhibited. -Zanhe (talk) 23:04, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
You may well be right... Here's an alt, Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk) 00:08, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg ALT1 is good, but I've reworded it slightly as ALT1a for clarity, and also added ALT2 to focus on the topic at hand. All three are fine, though I prefer ALT2. Article is well written, hooks are verified with sources, photo is freely licensed and beautiful, highly recommended for the main page. QPQ is done. No copyvio detected. Good to go. (Note: I'm approving my own hooks as they do not add any new information to ALT1 proposed by the nominator). -Zanhe (talk) 21:06, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this and did some light editing on the article. I moved the measurements into the Description section; could you provide a source for those? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:12, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
Hello, I've added a citation for the measurements, thanks, Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk) 22:54, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you. Restoring tick per Zanhe's review. Yoninah (talk) 22:59, 14 September 2019 (UTC)