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* ... that ...'''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''', one of New Zealand's largest spiders could be capable of ballooning between islands?  <small>Source: http://www.landcareresearch.co.nz/__data/assets/pdf_file/0004/49027/FNZ64VinkDuperre144.pdf</small>
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* ... that ...'''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''', one of New Zealand's largest spiders could be capable of [[ballooning (spider)|ballooning]] between islands?  <small>Source: http://www.landcareresearch.co.nz/__data/assets/pdf_file/0004/49027/FNZ64VinkDuperre144.pdf</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that ...'''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''' is one of New Zealand's largest and rarest spiders?  <small>Source: http://www.pressreader.com/new-zealand/the-dominion-post/20081229/281852934438528</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that ...'''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''' is one of New Zealand's largest and rarest spiders?  <small>Source: http://www.pressreader.com/new-zealand/the-dominion-post/20081229/281852934438528</small>
** '''ALT2''':... that ... females of '''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''', one of New Zealand's largest and rarest spiders, care for their eggs by carrying them around and guarding them when they hatch? <small>Source: http://www.landcareresearch.co.nz/__data/assets/pdf_file/0004/49027/FNZ64VinkDuperre144.pdf</small>
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** <s>'''ALT2''':... that ... females of '''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''', one of New Zealand's largest and rarest spiders, care for their eggs by carrying them around and guarding them when they hatch? </s> <small>Source: http://www.landcareresearch.co.nz/__data/assets/pdf_file/0004/49027/FNZ64VinkDuperre144.pdf</small>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Markanderson72|Markanderson72]] ([[User talk:Markanderson72|talk]]). Self-nominated at 02:08, 10 August 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Markanderson72|Markanderson72]] ([[User talk:Markanderson72|talk]]). Self-nominated at 02:08, 10 August 2017 (UTC).</small>
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:* New enough (replaced redirect) and long enough. Well cited (multiple per paragraph), neutral, no close paraphrasing detected. I didn't review ALT3 as I find it too wordy. Hook and Alt1 are both within length, verified in the sources, and otherwise acceptable. I did wikilink "ballooning" in the hook, and find it preferable (more interesting) than ALT1. Leaving for promoter to pick.
  
 
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Dolomedes schauinslandi

Dolomedes schauinslandi on Mangere Island
Dolomedes schauinslandi on Mangere Island

Created by Markanderson72 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:08, 10 August 2017 (UTC).

  • New enough (replaced redirect) and long enough. Well cited (multiple per paragraph), neutral, no close paraphrasing detected. I didn't review ALT3 as I find it too wordy. Hook and Alt1 are both within length, verified in the sources, and otherwise acceptable. I did wikilink "ballooning" in the hook, and find it preferable (more interesting) than ALT1. Leaving for promoter to pick.