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* ... that ...'''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''', one of New Zealand's largest spiders could be capable of [[ballooning (spider)|ballooning]] between islands?  <small>Source: http://www.landcareresearch.co.nz/__data/assets/pdf_file/0004/49027/FNZ64VinkDuperre144.pdf</small>
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* ... that '''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''' ''(pictured)'', one of New Zealand's largest spiders, could be capable of [[ballooning (spider)|ballooning]] between islands?  <small>Source: http://www.landcareresearch.co.nz/__data/assets/pdf_file/0004/49027/FNZ64VinkDuperre144.pdf</small>
** '''ALT1''':... that ...'''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''' is one of New Zealand's largest and rarest spiders?  <small>Source: http://www.pressreader.com/new-zealand/the-dominion-post/20081229/281852934438528</small>
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** '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''' ''(pictured)'' is one of New Zealand's largest and rarest spiders?  <small>Source: http://www.pressreader.com/new-zealand/the-dominion-post/20081229/281852934438528</small>
 
** <s>'''ALT2''':... that ... females of '''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''', one of New Zealand's largest and rarest spiders, care for their eggs by carrying them around and guarding them when they hatch? </s> <small>Source: http://www.landcareresearch.co.nz/__data/assets/pdf_file/0004/49027/FNZ64VinkDuperre144.pdf</small>
 
** <s>'''ALT2''':... that ... females of '''''[[Dolomedes schauinslandi]]''''', one of New Zealand's largest and rarest spiders, care for their eggs by carrying them around and guarding them when they hatch? </s> <small>Source: http://www.landcareresearch.co.nz/__data/assets/pdf_file/0004/49027/FNZ64VinkDuperre144.pdf</small>
 
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:* New enough (replaced redirect) and long enough. Well cited (multiple per paragraph), neutral, no close paraphrasing detected. I didn't review ALT3 as I find it too wordy. Hook and Alt1 are both within length, verified in the sources, and otherwise acceptable. I did wikilink "ballooning" in the hook, and find it preferable (more interesting) than ALT1. Leaving for promoter to pick.
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough (replaced redirect) and long enough. Well cited (multiple per paragraph), neutral, no close paraphrasing detected. I didn't review ALT3 as I find it too wordy. Hook and Alt1 are both within length, verified in the sources, and otherwise acceptable. I did wikilink "ballooning" in the hook, and find it preferable (more interesting) than ALT1. Leaving for promoter to pick. Both needed format cleanup. QPQ not required. Image is clear, used in article, and freely licensed (nominators own work on Commons). Good to go. [[User:MB|<b style="color:#00FF00">MB</b>]] 18:24, 12 August 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 18:25, 12 August 2017

Dolomedes schauinslandi

Dolomedes schauinslandi on Mangere Island
Dolomedes schauinslandi on Mangere Island

Created by Markanderson72 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:08, 10 August 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg New enough (replaced redirect) and long enough. Well cited (multiple per paragraph), neutral, no close paraphrasing detected. I didn't review ALT3 as I find it too wordy. Hook and Alt1 are both within length, verified in the sources, and otherwise acceptable. I did wikilink "ballooning" in the hook, and find it preferable (more interesting) than ALT1. Leaving for promoter to pick. Both needed format cleanup. QPQ not required. Image is clear, used in article, and freely licensed (nominators own work on Commons). Good to go. MB 18:24, 12 August 2017 (UTC)