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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]])&nbsp;06:02, 20 April 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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*<s> ... that footballer '''[[Donal Reid]]''' put out a woman who caught fire in his local church?</s>  <small>Source: [https://www.independent.ie/irish-news/all-ireland-winning-gaa-star-saves-woman-who-caught-fire-at-mass-37809272.html ''Irish Independent''] </small>
 
*<s> ... that footballer '''[[Donal Reid]]''' put out a woman who caught fire in his local church?</s>  <small>Source: [https://www.independent.ie/irish-news/all-ireland-winning-gaa-star-saves-woman-who-caught-fire-at-mass-37809272.html ''Irish Independent''] </small>
 
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:* ''Comment'': First sentence of very last paragraph. For April Fools' Day.
 
:* ''Comment'': First sentence of very last paragraph. For April Fools' Day.
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Litelad|Litelad]] ([[User talk:Litelad|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:26, 14 March 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Litelad|Litelad]] ([[User talk:Litelad|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:26, 14 March 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. Regarding the hook, this doesn't really fit the description of an April Fools hook, which is that the hook could be read as a double entendre. The language you're using is also inaccurate: ''she'' didn't catch fire, her coat did. I suggest writing the hook this way:
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. Regarding the hook, this doesn't really fit the description of an April Fools hook, which is that the hook could be read as a double entendre. The language you're using is also inaccurate: ''she'' didn't catch fire, her coat did. I suggest writing the hook this way:
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::::*Nice! But he didn't put out the coat, he put out the flames. Here's a tweak:
 
::::*Nice! But he didn't put out the coat, he put out the flames. Here's a tweak:
 
::::*'''ALT3a''': ... that former [[Gaelic football|football]]er '''[[Donal Reid]]''' used his bare hands to put out the flames when a woman's coat caught fire in his local church?  
 
::::*'''ALT3a''': ... that former [[Gaelic football|football]]er '''[[Donal Reid]]''' used his bare hands to put out the flames when a woman's coat caught fire in his local church?  
::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] ALT3a hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review above. ALT3a good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 01:35, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 06:02, 20 April 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:02, 20 April 2020 (UTC)

Donal Reid

  • Comment: First sentence of very last paragraph. For April Fools' Day.

5x expanded by Litelad (talk). Self-nominated at 19:26, 14 March 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. Regarding the hook, this doesn't really fit the description of an April Fools hook, which is that the hook could be read as a double entendre. The language you're using is also inaccurate: she didn't catch fire, her coat did. I suggest writing the hook this way:
  • ALT1: ... that retired Gaelic footballer Donal Reid put out the flames when an elderly woman's coat caught fire in his local church? Yoninah (talk) 18:16, 24 March 2020 (UTC)
  • That is a good suggestion. Litelad (talk) 01:52, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Although the detail seems overlong. Would the following be a further improvement?
  • ALT2: ... that former footballer Donal Reid rescued a woman whose coat caught fire in his local church? Litelad (talk) 13:17, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping yes, shorter is always better. But he didn't just "rescue" her; he stamped out the flames and burned his hands in the process. Could you write it a little more descriptively? Yoninah (talk) 18:05, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
  • I see. I can't see any "stamping" in the source though, just patting. The headline does say "woman who caught fire at mass". Anyway:
  • ALT3: ... that former footballer Donal Reid used his bare hands to put out the coat of a woman when it caught fire in his local church? Litelad (talk) 00:59, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Nice! But he didn't put out the coat, he put out the flames. Here's a tweak:
  • ALT3a: ... that former footballer Donal Reid used his bare hands to put out the flames when a woman's coat caught fire in his local church?
  • Symbol confirmed.svg ALT3a hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review above. ALT3a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 01:35, 16 April 2020 (UTC)