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:::'''ALT1''': that, in 2008, '''[[Edwin Ekiring]]''' became the first [[badminton|badminton player]] to compete for [[Uganda at the Olympics]]?
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::--[[User:ThaddeusB|ThaddeusB]] ([[User talk:ThaddeusB|talk]]) 05:11, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 05:11, 17 July 2012

Edwin Ekiring

  • Reviewed: Adam Kellerman
  • Comment: Save for when Ekiring competes at the Olympics (28 July to 5 August)

Created/expanded by Basement12 (talk). Self nom at 20:00, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Article date, length, and general compliance with policy have been verified. Hook is interesting and verified by inline citation. I do have a slight hesitation about the hook as worded because the reader will naturally assume it related to 2012 (I did anyway), when it actually refers to 2008. Thus I suggest,
ALT1: that, in 2008, Edwin Ekiring became the first badminton player to compete for Uganda at the Olympics?
--ThaddeusB (talk) 05:11, 17 July 2012 (UTC)