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::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Birthplace is not given in the source. In fact, none of the "Early life" section is corroborated by [http://www.walesonline.co.uk/sport/other-sport/olympic-shooter-elena-allen-aims-6555443 1] apart from the bit about the University of Bradford. Note that per [[WP:DYK#Cited hook]], "Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact. '''Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient''' [emphasis mine]" <font style="font-family: 'Times New Roman'">[[User:Intelligentsium|<span style="color:#013220">Intelligent</span>]]'''[[User_talk:Intelligentsium|<span style="color:Black">sium</span>]]'''</font> 23:13, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Birthplace is not given in the source. In fact, none of the "Early life" section is corroborated by [http://www.walesonline.co.uk/sport/other-sport/olympic-shooter-elena-allen-aims-6555443 1] apart from the bit about the University of Bradford. Note that per [[WP:DYK#Cited hook]], "Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact. '''Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient''' [emphasis mine]" <font style="font-family: 'Times New Roman'">[[User:Intelligentsium|<span style="color:#013220">Intelligent</span>]]'''[[User_talk:Intelligentsium|<span style="color:Black">sium</span>]]'''</font> 23:13, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
 
:::*I'd accidentally missed out a cite when writing it - it's now added, as it a direct cite for the hook fact about being born in Russia. [[User:Miyagawa|Miyagawa]] ([[User talk:Miyagawa|talk]]) 09:07, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
 
:::*I'd accidentally missed out a cite when writing it - it's now added, as it a direct cite for the hook fact about being born in Russia. [[User:Miyagawa|Miyagawa]] ([[User talk:Miyagawa|talk]]) 09:07, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
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::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thanks. Hook, date, length verified. No further concerns. <font style="font-family: 'Times New Roman'">[[User:Intelligentsium|<span style="color:#013220">Intelligent</span>]]'''[[User_talk:Intelligentsium|<span style="color:Black">sium</span>]]'''</font> 20:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
 
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Elena Allen

5x expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self-nominated at 15:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Page expanded 5x in the past 7 days, article is long enough. Well sourced and so is the hook. Neutral and no copyvios. Hook is short enough and relatively interesting. QPQ done and no image to check here. Looks good to go. Omni Flames let's talk about it 22:57, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Birthplace is not given in the source. In fact, none of the "Early life" section is corroborated by 1 apart from the bit about the University of Bradford. Note that per WP:DYK#Cited hook, "Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact. Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient [emphasis mine]" Intelligentsium 23:13, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
  • I'd accidentally missed out a cite when writing it - it's now added, as it a direct cite for the hook fact about being born in Russia. Miyagawa (talk) 09:07, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Thanks. Hook, date, length verified. No further concerns. Intelligentsium 20:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)