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:* {{ping|Ktin}} Thank you for your review. I copy edited according to your a.m. suggestions. Please recheck. [[User talk:CeeGee|CeeGee]] 09:36, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:* {{ping|Ktin}} Thank you for your review. I copy edited according to your a.m. suggestions. Please recheck. [[User talk:CeeGee|CeeGee]] 09:36, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
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::* {{ping|CeeGee}}, Thanks. I still think one more round of copy edit for grammar and language will be required before the article can be ready for homepage. Go ahead and take that pass. I will lend a hand later tonight once you take a pass.
 
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Revision as of 20:11, 26 November 2020

Eleni Küreman

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 11:39, 25 November 2020 (UTC).

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Additional Suggestions.

  1. Consider one round of copy edits across the article.
  2. Expand the lede to more than a sentence. There is definitely content in the body (e.g. organizations that she has represented) that can be thinned down and introduced into the lede.
  3. Combine private life, death and legacy sections. Currently they are small by themselves that they do not warrant three separate sections.

Happy to look at it once the changes are done. Ktin (talk) 20:01, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

  • Template:Ping Thank you for your review. I copy edited according to your a.m. suggestions. Please recheck. CeeGee 09:36, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping, Thanks. I still think one more round of copy edit for grammar and language will be required before the article can be ready for homepage. Go ahead and take that pass. I will lend a hand later tonight once you take a pass.