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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]])&nbsp;21:26, 6 December 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that [[sports photography|sports photographer]] '''[[Eleni Küreman]]''' was Turkey's first female [[photojournalism|photojournalist]]? <small>Source: "..., spor fotoğrafçılığında uzmanlaştı." {{LL|tr}} [https://www.hurriyet.com.tr/gundem/ilk-kadin-foto-muhabiri-8209], "She was Turkey’s first professional female photojournalist." [https://www.hurriyetdailynews.com/gender-and-memory-walks-unearth-hidden-secrets-of-istanbul-140170]</small>
 
* ... that [[sports photography|sports photographer]] '''[[Eleni Küreman]]''' was Turkey's first female [[photojournalism|photojournalist]]? <small>Source: "..., spor fotoğrafçılığında uzmanlaştı." {{LL|tr}} [https://www.hurriyet.com.tr/gundem/ilk-kadin-foto-muhabiri-8209], "She was Turkey’s first professional female photojournalist." [https://www.hurriyetdailynews.com/gender-and-memory-walks-unearth-hidden-secrets-of-istanbul-140170]</small>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:CeeGee|CeeGee]] ([[User talk:CeeGee|talk]]). Self-nominated at 11:39, 25 November 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:CeeGee|CeeGee]] ([[User talk:CeeGee|talk]]). Self-nominated at 11:39, 25 November 2020 (UTC).</small>
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::::::* Thanks {{ping|CeeGee}}. Updates done. DYK submission looks good to move to the next level. [[User:Ktin|Ktin]] ([[User talk:Ktin|talk]]) 19:08, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::* Thanks {{ping|CeeGee}}. Updates done. DYK submission looks good to move to the next level. [[User:Ktin|Ktin]] ([[User talk:Ktin|talk]]) 19:08, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::* I hope your approval without a DYK-tick can be processed. [[User talk:CeeGee|CeeGee]] 09:22, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::* I hope your approval without a DYK-tick can be processed. [[User talk:CeeGee|CeeGee]] 09:22, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Adding tick again. Review completed. Good to move to the next level. Thanks folks. [[User:Ktin|Ktin]] ([[User talk:Ktin|talk]]) 15:48, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 21:26, 6 December 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:26, 6 December 2020 (UTC)

Eleni Küreman

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 11:39, 25 November 2020 (UTC).

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Additional Suggestions.

  1. Consider one round of copy edits across the article.
  2. Expand the lede to more than a sentence. There is definitely content in the body (e.g. organizations that she has represented) that can be thinned down and introduced into the lede.
  3. Combine private life, death and legacy sections. Currently they are small by themselves that they do not warrant three separate sections.

Happy to look at it once the changes are done. Ktin (talk) 20:01, 25 November 2020 (UTC)

  • Template:Ping Thank you for your review. I copy edited according to your a.m. suggestions. Please recheck. CeeGee 09:36, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping, Thanks. I still think one more round of copy edit for grammar and language will be required before the article can be ready for homepage. Go ahead and take that pass. I will lend a hand later tonight once you take a pass.
  • Template:Ping Thank you for your efforts. However, the level of my English does not allow me to detect what you complain. Sorry about that. Maybe you are so nice to help. It won't prevent you from approving the DYK-nom later. CeeGee 10:44, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping, no worries. I have taken a pass at the copy-edits. Have a read to see if something is incorrect. I referred to the links to some of the Turkish newspapers that you had included, but, I had to rely on online translators. Re: a quote about her photography tactics while covering football matches, can you read the link and confirm if it is a quote from her or is it a quote from her husband? The translation was ambiguous. Ktin (talk) 16:49, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping, thanks a lot for your contribution. I noticed two points, which I hesitate to correct. Please check: The newspaper "Vakit" is listed twice in a sentence of the lede. Under the section "Private life", "... where she was being treated after she an injury ..." seems not correct. About the quote: The English-language newspaper Hürriyet Daily Mews writes, it was she herself, who told that. CeeGee 10:48, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks Template:Ping. Updates done. DYK submission looks good to move to the next level. Ktin (talk) 19:08, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
  • I hope your approval without a DYK-tick can be processed. CeeGee 09:22, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Adding tick again. Review completed. Good to move to the next level. Thanks folks. Ktin (talk) 15:48, 29 November 2020 (UTC)