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*'''ALT1'''  ... that [[Wim T. Schippers]]' TV shows, produced by '''[[Ellen Jens]]''', introduced characters played by '''[[Dolf Brouwers]]''' ''(pictured)'', a former vacuum cleaner salesman, '''[[IJf Blokker]]''', a former drummer, and '''[[Clous van Mechelen]]''', a jazz musician?
 
*'''ALT1'''  ... that [[Wim T. Schippers]]' TV shows, produced by '''[[Ellen Jens]]''', introduced characters played by '''[[Dolf Brouwers]]''' ''(pictured)'', a former vacuum cleaner salesman, '''[[IJf Blokker]]''', a former drummer, and '''[[Clous van Mechelen]]''', a jazz musician?
 
:*Hmm. Maybe. I suppose. It's just that they are ''such'' good names, and I'm not sure you realize that Ge Braadslee and Boy Bensdorp aren't even in there! Anyway, I'll agree, IF you stick "former script girl" back in, for purposes of symmetry etc. (And also, they are there to indicate that Schippers was kind of a career maker.) [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 02:03, 9 September 2013 (UTC)
 
:*Hmm. Maybe. I suppose. It's just that they are ''such'' good names, and I'm not sure you realize that Ge Braadslee and Boy Bensdorp aren't even in there! Anyway, I'll agree, IF you stick "former script girl" back in, for purposes of symmetry etc. (And also, they are there to indicate that Schippers was kind of a career maker.) [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 02:03, 9 September 2013 (UTC)
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::*Well, the original hook is o.k., just a bit long. I assume the names means something in Dutch, but they do not have any significance in English. ALT2 below.
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*'''ALT2'''  ... that [[Wim T. Schippers]]' TV shows, produced by former script girl '''[[Ellen Jens]]''', introduced characters played by '''[[Dolf Brouwers]]''' ''(pictured)'', a former vacuum cleaner salesman, '''[[IJf Blokker]]''', a former drummer, and '''[[Clous van Mechelen]]''', a jazz musician?
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:[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]][[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]][[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] [[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]) 12:13, 9 September 2013 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 12:13, 9 September 2013

Ellen Jens

Sjef van Oekel

Created/expanded by Drmies (talk). Self nominated at 17:44, 27 August 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg New enough, long enough and neutral. Well sourced but AGF on the sources in Foreign, which seem plausible. Hook is supported. 3 out of 4 were flagged as stubs, so I undid that - seems to me that over 1,500 means not a stub. Good to go. The hook is 296 chars. That is only 74 per article so not too long, but how about the 222-character ALT1 below? Aymatth2 (talk) 00:58, 5 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Hmm. Maybe. I suppose. It's just that they are such good names, and I'm not sure you realize that Ge Braadslee and Boy Bensdorp aren't even in there! Anyway, I'll agree, IF you stick "former script girl" back in, for purposes of symmetry etc. (And also, they are there to indicate that Schippers was kind of a career maker.) Drmies (talk) 02:03, 9 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Well, the original hook is o.k., just a bit long. I assume the names means something in Dutch, but they do not have any significance in English. ALT2 below.
Symbol confirmed.svgSymbol confirmed.svgSymbol confirmed.svg Aymatth2 (talk) 12:13, 9 September 2013 (UTC)