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<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:Drdisque|Drdisque]] ([[User talk:Drdisque|talk]]), [[User:The Bushranger|The Bushranger]] ([[User talk:The Bushranger|talk]]).  Nominated by [[User:The Bushranger|The Bushranger]] ([[User talk:The Bushranger|talk]]) at 16:22, 3 June 2012 (UTC)</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:Drdisque|Drdisque]] ([[User talk:Drdisque|talk]]), [[User:The Bushranger|The Bushranger]] ([[User talk:The Bushranger|talk]]).  Nominated by [[User:The Bushranger|The Bushranger]] ([[User talk:The Bushranger|talk]]) at 16:22, 3 June 2012 (UTC)</small>
  
:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Date, length, and hook verified.  My only suggestion to the author(s) is to use something like WebCite to archive the online sources. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; font-family: fantasy, cursive, Serif">'''–&nbsp;[[User:Maky|<font color="darkgreen">Maky</font>]] <sup>«[[User talk:Maky|<font color="olive">&nbsp;talk&nbsp;</font>]]»</sup>'''</span> 00:17, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Date, length, and hook verified.  My only suggestion to the author(s) is to use something like WebCite to archive the online sources. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; font-family: fantasy, cursive, Serif">'''–&nbsp;[[User:Maky|<span style="color:darkgreen;">Maky</span>]] <sup>«[[User talk:Maky|<span style="color:olive;">&nbsp;talk&nbsp;</span>]]»</sup>'''</span> 00:17, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I have a problem with the hook's wording: his career was not put on hold for a full eleven years; his career was put on hold after September 11. In fact, according to what Newton-John says in the second (Insight) source, his final open-wheel race was September 10, 2001. Can the hook be revised to reflect this? Even "on hold for over ten years" or "over a decade" would do it. The third source, cited in the third paragraph, does not actually say eleven years, it says "nearly eleven years", which in that case seems to mean it was about ten and two-thirds. I would like to suggest that the first paragraph under racing career be made more than one sentence, and the date of his final race before September 11 be given for clarity. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 03:53, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I have a problem with the hook's wording: his career was not put on hold for a full eleven years; his career was put on hold after September 11. In fact, according to what Newton-John says in the second (Insight) source, his final open-wheel race was September 10, 2001. Can the hook be revised to reflect this? Even "on hold for over ten years" or "over a decade" would do it. The third source, cited in the third paragraph, does not actually say eleven years, it says "nearly eleven years", which in that case seems to mean it was about ten and two-thirds. I would like to suggest that the first paragraph under racing career be made more than one sentence, and the date of his final race before September 11 be given for clarity. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 03:53, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
:::*Done and done. - [[User:The Bushranger|The Bushranger]] <sub><font color="maroon">[[User talk:The Bushranger|One ping only]]</font></sub> 04:30, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
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:::*Done and done. - [[User:The Bushranger|The Bushranger]] <sub>[[User talk:The Bushranger|<span style="color:maroon;">One ping only</span>]]</sub> 04:30, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Hook looks fine; changes are good, and I added a qualifier to the section's third paragraph so it longer says "eleven years" flat out. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 05:31, 4 June 2012 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
 
::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Hook looks fine; changes are good, and I added a qualifier to the section's third paragraph so it longer says "eleven years" flat out. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 05:31, 4 June 2012 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

Latest revision as of 19:17, 30 January 2019

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Rcsprinter (yak) 13:04, 5 June 2012 (UTC)

Emerson Newton-John

Created/expanded by Drdisque (talk), The Bushranger (talk). Nominated by The Bushranger (talk) at 16:22, 3 June 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Date, length, and hook verified. My only suggestion to the author(s) is to use something like WebCite to archive the online sources. – Maky « talk » 00:17, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg I have a problem with the hook's wording: his career was not put on hold for a full eleven years; his career was put on hold after September 11. In fact, according to what Newton-John says in the second (Insight) source, his final open-wheel race was September 10, 2001. Can the hook be revised to reflect this? Even "on hold for over ten years" or "over a decade" would do it. The third source, cited in the third paragraph, does not actually say eleven years, it says "nearly eleven years", which in that case seems to mean it was about ten and two-thirds. I would like to suggest that the first paragraph under racing career be made more than one sentence, and the date of his final race before September 11 be given for clarity. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:53, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Hook looks fine; changes are good, and I added a qualifier to the section's third paragraph so it longer says "eleven years" flat out. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:31, 4 June 2012 (UTC)