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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Gerda Arendt}} Mostly good; it's new enough, long enough and reliably sourced and within policy. QPQ has been done. I've made some minor changes to fix grammatical issues and added "the opening of several" to the hook to provide some necessary clarity. However, I don't see the hook fact stated explicitly in the article. It mentions the Erfurter Bahn starting to operate new lines but doesn't actually state that the new lines were announced at any point. Could this please be fixed? [[User:Prioryman|Prioryman]] ([[User talk:Prioryman|talk]]) 21:40, 26 September 2015 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Gerda Arendt}} Mostly good; it's new enough, long enough and reliably sourced and within policy. QPQ has been done. I've made some minor changes to fix grammatical issues and added "the opening of several" to the hook to provide some necessary clarity. However, I don't see the hook fact stated explicitly in the article. It mentions the Erfurter Bahn starting to operate new lines but doesn't actually state that the new lines were announced at any point. Could this please be fixed? [[User:Prioryman|Prioryman]] ([[User talk:Prioryman|talk]]) 21:40, 26 September 2015 (UTC) | ||
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| + | ::: Thank you, very observant, I had forgotten to state again that the announcement also referred to the opening of the lines. | ||
| + | ::: '''ALT1''': ... that the regional railway '''[[Erfurter Bahn]]''', serving the [[Erfurt|capital of Thuringia]] ''(train in Erfurt pictured)'', announced the opening of several new lines under the trademark Elster Saale Bahn on its centenary? | ||
| + | ::: '''ALT2''': ... that the regional railway '''[[Erfurter Bahn]]''', serving the [[Erfurt|capital of Thuringia]] ''(train in Erfurt pictured)'', designed a special train to celebrate 1000 years Leipzig? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 12:21, 30 September 2015 (UTC) | ||
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Erfurter Bahn
- ... that the regional railway Erfurter Bahn, serving the capital of Thuringia (train in Erfurt pictured), announced the opening of several new lines on its centenary?
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5x expanded by Alakzi (talk) and Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 19:12, 17 September 2015 (UTC).
Template:Ping Mostly good; it's new enough, long enough and reliably sourced and within policy. QPQ has been done. I've made some minor changes to fix grammatical issues and added "the opening of several" to the hook to provide some necessary clarity. However, I don't see the hook fact stated explicitly in the article. It mentions the Erfurter Bahn starting to operate new lines but doesn't actually state that the new lines were announced at any point. Could this please be fixed? Prioryman (talk) 21:40, 26 September 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you, very observant, I had forgotten to state again that the announcement also referred to the opening of the lines.
- ALT1: ... that the regional railway Erfurter Bahn, serving the capital of Thuringia (train in Erfurt pictured), announced the opening of several new lines under the trademark Elster Saale Bahn on its centenary?
- ALT2: ... that the regional railway Erfurter Bahn, serving the capital of Thuringia (train in Erfurt pictured), designed a special train to celebrate 1000 years Leipzig? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:21, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
