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:*'''ALT 1:''' ... that '''[[Erhard Egidi]]''' conducted in 1990 both the first performance of a piece of funeral music that had been lost for 300 years and [[Johann Sebastian Bach|Bach]]'s [[Mass in B minor]]?
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:*Otherwise the hook tries to say too much. Presume the citation [7] at the end of the paragraph covers the hook, but it needs appending to the actual statement; accepted on good faith, new, long enough and otherwise adequate. Please confirm acceptance of Alt hook or propose another. [[User:MasterOfHisOwnDomain|MasterOfHisOwnDomain]] ([[User talk:MasterOfHisOwnDomain|talk]]) 12:14, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
  
 
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Erhard Egidi

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nominated at 14:00, 26 April 2013 (UTC).

  • ALT 1: ... that Erhard Egidi conducted in 1990 both the first performance of a piece of funeral music that had been lost for 300 years and Bach's Mass in B minor?
  • Otherwise the hook tries to say too much. Presume the citation [7] at the end of the paragraph covers the hook, but it needs appending to the actual statement; accepted on good faith, new, long enough and otherwise adequate. Please confirm acceptance of Alt hook or propose another. MasterOfHisOwnDomain (talk) 12:14, 10 May 2013 (UTC)