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::Maybe a new reviewer, as the original reviewer now has "semi-retired" on their user page.[[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 17:06, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
 
::Maybe a new reviewer, as the original reviewer now has "semi-retired" on their user page.[[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 17:06, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
 
:::[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough, new enough, QPQ done, no copyvios detected, hook short enough but uninteresting - would suggest the following:
 
:::[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough, new enough, QPQ done, no copyvios detected, hook short enough but uninteresting - would suggest the following:
::::*'''ALT1''': ... that Peruvian leftist parliamentarian '''[[Eriberto Arroyo Mío]]''' was killed whilst driving his son to school?--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 15:15, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
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::::*'''ALT1''': ... that Peruvian leftist parliamentarian '''[[Eriberto Arroyo Mío]]''' was assassinated whilst driving his son to school?--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 15:15, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
 
*'''Comment''', I would be ok with ALT1. The error in the date of death is corrected now. --[[User:Soman|Soman]] ([[User talk:Soman|talk]]) 00:32, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
 
*'''Comment''', I would be ok with ALT1. The error in the date of death is corrected now. --[[User:Soman|Soman]] ([[User talk:Soman|talk]]) 00:32, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
 
::Fine by me, but I can't approve my own hooks. {{p|:)}}
 
::Fine by me, but I can't approve my own hooks. {{p|:)}}
 
::[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  New reviewer needed to review the hook.--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 00:49, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
 
::[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  New reviewer needed to review the hook.--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 00:49, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. I added some identification of the subject from the original hook to the alt. ALT1 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:11, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. I added some identification of the subject from the original hook to the alt. ALT1 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:11, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
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::::*Changed "killed" to "assassinated". I did the same in the article. Otherwise, it sounds like he was killed in a road accident. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:42, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
 
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Eriberto Arroyo Mío

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 04:15, 27 January 2014 (UTC).

  • 16px Length's ok-- one note: the article text says he died April 29, but the source says April 27. --HectorMoffet (talk) 08:57, 1 February 2014 (UTC)
Maybe a new reviewer, as the original reviewer now has "semi-retired" on their user page.— Maile (talk) 17:06, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
16px Long enough, new enough, QPQ done, no copyvios detected, hook short enough but uninteresting - would suggest the following:
  • ALT1: ... that Peruvian leftist parliamentarian Eriberto Arroyo Mío was assassinated whilst driving his son to school?--Launchballer 15:15, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment, I would be ok with ALT1. The error in the date of death is corrected now. --Soman (talk) 00:32, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
Fine by me, but I can't approve my own hooks. 18px
16px New reviewer needed to review the hook.--Launchballer 00:49, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
  • 16px Article is new enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. I added some identification of the subject from the original hook to the alt. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:11, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Changed "killed" to "assassinated". I did the same in the article. Otherwise, it sounds like he was killed in a road accident. Yoninah (talk) 22:42, 10 February 2014 (UTC)