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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:06, 29 June 2019 (UTC)<br />
 
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* <s>... that a [[Facebook]] employee wrote a five-star review of '''[[Facebook Portal]]''' on [[Amazon (company)|Amazon]], where he claimed that he was not a big Facebook user before buying the device?</s>
 
* <s>... that a [[Facebook]] employee wrote a five-star review of '''[[Facebook Portal]]''' on [[Amazon (company)|Amazon]], where he claimed that he was not a big Facebook user before buying the device?</s>
 
** '''ALT1''':<s>... that a suspected [[Facebook]] employee wrote a five-star review of '''[[Facebook Portal]]''' on [[Amazon (company)|Amazon]], and claimed not to be a big Facebook user before buying the device?</s>
 
** '''ALT1''':<s>... that a suspected [[Facebook]] employee wrote a five-star review of '''[[Facebook Portal]]''' on [[Amazon (company)|Amazon]], and claimed not to be a big Facebook user before buying the device?</s>
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<small>5x expanded by [[User:Newslinger|Newslinger]] ([[User talk:Newslinger|talk]]). Self-nominated at 03:44, 19 June 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New, long, interesting enough article; interesting hook. All looks good. Might want some more reliable sources than Mashable/Twitter/Hindustan Times but Engadget and CNET give everything important good credibility. [[User:Kingsif|Kingsif]] ([[User talk:Kingsif|talk]]) 16:36, 23 June 2019 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New, long, interesting enough article; interesting hook. All looks good. Might want some more reliable sources than Mashable/Twitter/Hindustan Times but Engadget and CNET give everything important good credibility. [[User:Kingsif|Kingsif]] ([[User talk:Kingsif|talk]]) 16:36, 23 June 2019 (UTC)
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:::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. Restoring tick for ALT1b per Kingsif's review. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:11, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. Restoring tick for ALT1b per Kingsif's review. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:11, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::**Thanks for your help with the final hook! {{bcc|Yoninah}}—&nbsp;'''''[[User:Newslinger|<span style="color:#536267;">Newslinger</span>]]'''&nbsp;<small>[[User talk:Newslinger#top|<span style="color:#708090;">talk</span>]]</small>'' 22:15, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::**Thanks for your help with the final hook! {{bcc|Yoninah}}—&nbsp;'''''[[User:Newslinger|<span style="color:#536267;">Newslinger</span>]]'''&nbsp;<small>[[User talk:Newslinger#top|<span style="color:#708090;">talk</span>]]</small>'' 22:15, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 22:06, 29 June 2019

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:06, 29 June 2019 (UTC)

Facebook Portal

  • ... that a Facebook employee wrote a five-star review of Facebook Portal on Amazon, where he claimed that he was not a big Facebook user before buying the device?
    • ALT1:... that a suspected Facebook employee wrote a five-star review of Facebook Portal on Amazon, and claimed not to be a big Facebook user before buying the device?
  • Reviewed: This is my second DYK nomination, and is exempt from QPQ.
  • Comment: Source: Template:Tq

Template:Tref 5x expanded by Newslinger (talk). Self-nominated at 03:44, 19 June 2019 (UTC).

  • 16px New, long, interesting enough article; interesting hook. All looks good. Might want some more reliable sources than Mashable/Twitter/Hindustan Times but Engadget and CNET give everything important good credibility. Kingsif (talk) 16:36, 23 June 2019 (UTC)
  • 16px Hi, I came by to promote this, but the hook wording needs to be adjusted. It's only suspected that the reviewer was a Facebook employee. And why is the second half of the hook hooky? Are all Facebook employees users of Facebook? Yoninah (talk) 21:05, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
    Hi Template:U, thanks for looking over the hook. I've added ALT1, which includes the word "suspected" to be more accurate. As for the second half, Facebook employees use Workplace by Facebook, which includes Facebook Groups, to communicate internally within the company:
    Are the changes in ALT1 acceptable? — Newslinger talk 21:36, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping how about
  • ALT1a: ... that a Facebook employee supposedly wrote a five-star review of Facebook Portal on Amazon, and claimed not to be a big Facebook user before buying the device? Yoninah (talk) 21:45, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
    • Looks good to me. I've struck out the others. — Newslinger talk 21:47, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping thank you. But I wonder if it's more effective like this:
  • ALT1b: ... that a five-star Amazon review of Facebook Portal, by a writer who claimed not to be a big Facebook user before buying the device, was traced to a Facebook employee? Yoninah (talk) 21:49, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
    • Wow, I think ALT1b is the best one. The word "traced" works really well here. — Newslinger talk 21:53, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
  • 16px Thank you. Restoring tick for ALT1b per Kingsif's review. Yoninah (talk) 22:11, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
    • Thanks for your help with the final hook! — Newslinger talk 22:15, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
Template:Tref
  1. "Discover the Value of Workplace by Facebook". Facebook. September 22, 2017. Retrieved June 27, 2019.
  2. Cross, Simon (October 15, 2018). "Workplace by Facebook on the future of yours". Brunswick Review. Brunswick Group. Retrieved June 27, 2019.
  3. Fisher, Anne (June 25, 2014). "How Facebook employees use Facebook at work". Fortune. Retrieved June 27, 2019.