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{{*mp}}... that [[Queen Wilhelmina of the Netherlands|Queen Wilhelmina]] attended the 300th anniversary services of the '''[[First Church in Albany (Reformed)|First Church in Albany]]''' ''(pictured)'', the second-oldest [[local church|congregation]] in New York?
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{{*mp}}... that [[Queen Wilhelmina of the Netherlands|Queen Wilhelmina]] visited the '''[[First Church in Albany (Reformed)|First Church in Albany]]''' ''(pictured)'', the second-oldest [[local church|congregation]] in New York, on the occasion of its 300th anniversary?
 
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:[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Good expansion, good sources! The picture is free and good. Minor questions: the hook is sourced to the church's website, which says that the 300th anniversary and the visit of Wilhelmina happened in 1942, but not that she attended the services. - I don't understand "Five years later the church was formally incorporated itself, as the Reformed Protestant Dutch Church in the City of Albany." - I would prefer to see the bolding for redirect South Dutch Church in the lead. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 17:19, 25 February 2013 (UTC)
 
:[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Good expansion, good sources! The picture is free and good. Minor questions: the hook is sourced to the church's website, which says that the 300th anniversary and the visit of Wilhelmina happened in 1942, but not that she attended the services. - I don't understand "Five years later the church was formally incorporated itself, as the Reformed Protestant Dutch Church in the City of Albany." - I would prefer to see the bolding for redirect South Dutch Church in the lead. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 17:19, 25 February 2013 (UTC)
 
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::Sorry to be so delayed in responding, Gerda—unusually, I've got a lot of hooks in the queue so I don't have just this one to focus on for once.<p>I have reworded the hook to be more in accord with the source and will appropriately edit the article. Thanks. [[User:Daniel Case|Daniel Case]] ([[User talk:Daniel Case|talk]]) 18:08, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 18:08, 7 March 2013

First Church in Albany (Reformed)

View of the church from across North Pearl Street

  • Comment: I believe this counts as a fivefold text expansion.

5x expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Self nominated at 03:48, 25 February 2013 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Good expansion, good sources! The picture is free and good. Minor questions: the hook is sourced to the church's website, which says that the 300th anniversary and the visit of Wilhelmina happened in 1942, but not that she attended the services. - I don't understand "Five years later the church was formally incorporated itself, as the Reformed Protestant Dutch Church in the City of Albany." - I would prefer to see the bolding for redirect South Dutch Church in the lead. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:19, 25 February 2013 (UTC)
Sorry to be so delayed in responding, Gerda—unusually, I've got a lot of hooks in the queue so I don't have just this one to focus on for once.

I have reworded the hook to be more in accord with the source and will appropriately edit the article. Thanks. Daniel Case (talk) 18:08, 7 March 2013 (UTC)