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* ... that the two members of Texas band the '''[[Foxymorons]]''', David Dewese and Jerry James, first met at church camp when they were in high school?
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* <s>... that the two members of Texas band the '''[[Foxymorons]]''', David Dewese and Jerry James, first met at church camp when they were in high school?</s>
  
 
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good article, well-written. Right length, well-within 7 days. No copyvios (using Earwig's tool). Inline citations are good and they correctly cite the hook. QPQ checked and OK. With just a bit more clarity in one citation there could be an even better hook: " ... that the [[Texas]] band the '''[[Foxymorons]]''' began life as a lie? Musicians David Dewese and Jerry James pretended to be in a band in their teens, but only recorded music together years later."  But it's '''good to go''' as it is  [[User:Parkywiki|Parkywiki]] ([[User talk:Parkywiki|talk]]) 13:36, 28 January 2016 (UTC)  
 
:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good article, well-written. Right length, well-within 7 days. No copyvios (using Earwig's tool). Inline citations are good and they correctly cite the hook. QPQ checked and OK. With just a bit more clarity in one citation there could be an even better hook: " ... that the [[Texas]] band the '''[[Foxymorons]]''' began life as a lie? Musicians David Dewese and Jerry James pretended to be in a band in their teens, but only recorded music together years later."  But it's '''good to go''' as it is  [[User:Parkywiki|Parkywiki]] ([[User talk:Parkywiki|talk]]) 13:36, 28 January 2016 (UTC)  
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::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Struck original hook and verified alternative, as being much more interesting. '''<font color="#00824A">[[User:Jolly Janner|Jolly]]</font> <font color="#2A5FFF">[[Special:Contributions/Jolly Janner|Ω]]</font> <font color="#00824A">[[User talk:Jolly Janner|Janner]]</font>''' 07:26, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
  
 
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Foxymorons

  • ... that the two members of Texas band the Foxymorons, David Dewese and Jerry James, first met at church camp when they were in high school?

Created by Everymorning (talk). Self-nominated at 14:42, 9 January 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Good article, well-written. Right length, well-within 7 days. No copyvios (using Earwig's tool). Inline citations are good and they correctly cite the hook. QPQ checked and OK. With just a bit more clarity in one citation there could be an even better hook: " ... that the Texas band the Foxymorons began life as a lie? Musicians David Dewese and Jerry James pretended to be in a band in their teens, but only recorded music together years later." But it's good to go as it is Parkywiki (talk) 13:36, 28 January 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Struck original hook and verified alternative, as being much more interesting. Jolly Ω Janner 07:26, 2 February 2016 (UTC)