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imported>Gerda Arendt
 
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* ... that [[Richard Strauss]] ''(pictured)'' composed the art song "'''[[Freundliche Vision]]'''", describing a dream while awake, the same year as [[Feuersnot|his first opera]]?  <small>Source: several</small>
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* ... that [[Richard Strauss]] ''(pictured)'' composed the [[art song]] "'''[[Freundliche Vision]]'''", describing a waking dream, the same year as [[Feuersnot|his first opera]]?  <small>Source: several</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/David M. Wilson|David M. Wilson]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/David M. Wilson|David M. Wilson]]
 
<small>Created by [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 17:58, 9 January 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 17:58, 9 January 2018 (UTC).</small>
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* {{DYKmake|Freundliche Vision|Gerda Arendt|subpage=Freundliche Vision}}
 
* {{DYKmake|Freundliche Vision|Gerda Arendt|subpage=Freundliche Vision}}
 
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|comments    = Article was new enough when nominated, is long enough (>1700 characters), strikes an appropriately neutral tone, and has a QPQ done and no plagiarism issues that I can see. The hook is supported by citations; it's not extremely interesting, but I can't immediately think of a better one. The image is clear and old enough to be in the public domain. There are a couple of citation issues: first, there's no citation for the publisher the article names, and I couldn't find a mention of the publisher in any of the linked sources. Where did you learn the publisher from? Second, the section "Music," which describes the structure and features of the song, has only one citation at the end, and that citation doesn't say anything about the structure or features of the song. That section needs a published source. If those two pieces can be supported by citations, the article will be ready to go.
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Revision as of 21:40, 9 January 2018

Freundliche Vision

Richard Strauss in 1900
Richard Strauss in 1900

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 17:58, 9 January 2018 (UTC). Lua error: expandTemplate: template "y" does not exist.